A Story

[ofthegrey]

Preface

How many times had I dreamt about a warm hand cupping my flushed face, deep eyes staring into mine, and soft lips uttering the soundless words, “I love you”?  A mysterious, clouded figure always entered my sleep and stole my heart, night after night.  Sometimes his hair was jet black and silky smooth, extending down his back into long pleats

Comments

[serenitytouched]

It's a lot easier to read it as a whole on here than aim. I think I was missing some sentences.

I do really like it. There's a lot of layers going on which makes it really intriguing.

You should write moar, lova.

[ofthegrey]

I'm not really sure what it's about. I have a few weak ideas. It's just something I came up with on a walk, and it pretty much ends there. This is my problem with writing, I just get these little spurts of ideas and then blank.

[serenitytouched]

Hum, it takes some thinking. I usually sleep on things at night to think about the story/what I have if I want to broaden it a bit. I usually read whatever I write and just sleepies.

Sometimes it just helps to try and force yourself to write. Cause you'll just get no where if you don't do anything.

[ofthegrey]

Agreed. I'd really like to write a fic, as you well know. It was really nice to do something "creative" even if it only took a few minutes. Perhaps I'll try to work on it this weekend.

[xypnise]

I really enjoyed this!! You know, it's not easy to write things this vivid and full of expression. Especially in such a way that you can captivate your audience into wanting more. You really made me think on WHAT this was about exactly, as it can (at least for me) be interpreted in at least two, if not three different ways for the meaning behind it.

I really admire your sophisticated grammar style. I wish I could write like that.

[ofthegrey]

Lol honestly I'm not really sure what it's about either. Even if I did I wrote this as a preface to a book, so I wanted it to be mysterious. You'd have to read the story to actually get what was going on. Anyway, thanks for the compliments! I sort of wonder if it's too ethereal, but like I said I wrote it as the preface. I think if I write actual chapters they'll be more grounded. I'm going to try to just write a little at a time and not push it, so we'll see where it goes.