A Story

Jun 04, 2012 19:48


Preface

How many times had I dreamt about a warm hand cupping my flushed face, deep eyes staring into mine, and soft lips uttering the soundless words, “I love you”?  A mysterious, clouded figure always entered my sleep and stole my heart, night after night.  Sometimes his hair was jet black and silky smooth, extending down his back into long pleats ( Read more... )

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serenitytouched June 5 2012, 01:06:10 UTC
It's a lot easier to read it as a whole on here than aim. I think I was missing some sentences.

I do really like it. There's a lot of layers going on which makes it really intriguing.

You should write moar, lova.

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ofthegrey June 5 2012, 01:09:58 UTC
I'm not really sure what it's about. I have a few weak ideas. It's just something I came up with on a walk, and it pretty much ends there. This is my problem with writing, I just get these little spurts of ideas and then blank.

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serenitytouched June 5 2012, 08:45:25 UTC
Hum, it takes some thinking. I usually sleep on things at night to think about the story/what I have if I want to broaden it a bit. I usually read whatever I write and just sleepies.

Sometimes it just helps to try and force yourself to write. Cause you'll just get no where if you don't do anything.

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ofthegrey June 5 2012, 21:46:37 UTC
Agreed. I'd really like to write a fic, as you well know. It was really nice to do something "creative" even if it only took a few minutes. Perhaps I'll try to work on it this weekend.

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serenitytouched June 5 2012, 21:48:49 UTC
You and I both know you just need to start watching Naruto already. Then we can collaborate on fanfiction together ♥

But yesh, you should give it a try this weekend.

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