[The Beatles] Fic: Backwards Traveller [13/13], John/Paul (PG-13)

[obstinatrix]

Title: Backwards Traveller
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Paul
Authors: tini_91 and obstinatrix
Summary/Notes: New York in the late 70s feels like a world away from Europe almost two decades earlier, but when John settles down to write some more of his short 'fiction', he finds that, frankly, he misses Paris. This is 1961, in retrospective.

Comments

[bbgirlz]

I've often wondered about John's apparent and rather obvious love and longing for Paris, and I can't help to think that it had a lot to do with Paul and this trip. This story pictured very nice what could have happened, and what I certainly wish had happened.

About this chapter, I couldn't help but smile when Paul told John he loved him and how nonchalantly John tried to act, adorable. I also loved that they avoided each other for a week after they arrived back in Liverpool... I can see them doing that, completely! Like going back to their familiar territory reminded them that it shouldn't happen anymore, and probably made them think that hey had done what they did because Paris worked its magic on them, you know, blame it on Paris, the city of love! ... And the phone sex! "worst phone sex ever" LOL crap! I'd love to read exactly how that went, even if I'm cracking up half the time! (I really thought they were going to have phone sex again, I have to admit that I'm glad they didn't).

One of the things I loved the most is that you kept writing "his Paul" "his John"... Yeah, they always had/belonged to each other, at least in some way.

Now, where comes the rant:

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME LIKE THIS??!! I WANT TO KNOW THAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! IF THEY MEET OR NOT, IF THEY ... YOU KNOW... ;)
If inspiration strikes again for this fic, I would LOVE to read a sort of epilogue! :P

This was an excellent story, girls. Really, loved it! :) Hope to read much more from you.