Chapter 9 - Delving beneath his diamond heart

[obsidianinks]

Shrill weeping pierced his hazed vision, the soft choked sobs sending shivers of terror to trail down his spine, making itself known to him amidst the callous jeers and menacing shouts of the milling horde of villagers that surrounded him. He lifted his head blearily from his curled foetal position upon the muddy ground, to rest his horrified eyes

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[obsidianinks]

SPOT~! for ekin_hardy, succexytop and ting5! (^_^)

i tore my hair out trying to post this entry after slogging it out till 3 in the morn.. lj wont let me italise some words and place the *** in the center, go figure.. anyways, im sorry, theres no yoosu here, but there'll be lots in the next chapter. if i can finish it by this week that is.. hehehe sorry the long wait guys, just came back from bangkok. anyways I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE THIS CHAPTER!! (^_^)
although its abit dry? *bows in advance*

[ekin_hardy]

describe 'dry' to me darling~~

eventhough there's no yoosu,, I'm satisfied with this chapter...my yoosu dose was filled by ur oneshot...btw,, u make me google-d bodhi...XD

He had glanced beneath the shelter of his cap with narrowed eyes whenever his sensitive ears picked out his name being uttered, watching Jaejoong for any telltale signs of his feelings towards Yunho. Jaejoong constantly surprised him, a delicate smile gracing his lips whenever Yunho was mentioned.

-I sensed a curious Yunho,,, trying to pick-up every small tiny detail of Jaejoong's action...-

What was the reason...

-Now, that's a good question Yunho....-

When I 1st read this fic,, I nvr knew that I'll be so hooked up by it...Do I regret google-d for 'obsidianinks' to find this fic? NO WAY~~

[obsidianinks]

hehehe, im glad you liked it dearie~! yunho finally has a glimpse of another side of jaejoong which i think really helps him to understand jae more.. my fingers have been itching to write this chapter for so long.. hehe, just that i have a lack of a computer in bangkok.

im really glad youre so hooked by it as well, thought the storyline would confuse alot of people.. (^_^) *hugs and kisses* OH! AND. *squish!* hahahahaha

love, mel

[ting5]

where's the dryness, i cant feel any dear :DD

ahh Yunho it sure is time for you to learn and understand Jae more but i guess he'll only know more if Jae will let him..Jae is such a sweetheart ne makes me want to squeeze him so hard *gets kicked* XD

Although this is all yunjae but it's still very satisfying to read..though i'll be waiting for Yoosu nxt chap dear ^-^

[obsidianinks]

hehehe no, no. no kicking my lovely ting5.. jae is a sweetheart~ and you can squeeze him as much as you want.. as long as yunho doesnt mind of course.. lol *now i get kicked*

hehe, ill bring the yoosu love to you! (^_^) *hugs and kisses* love, mel..

[ting5]

haha will anticipate it dear, will prepare Yoosu cookies :)