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nyargles

fic: One Last Time

Jul 17, 2010 13:35

Title: One Last Time
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: Angst
Word count: 746
Summary: For the summerpornathon Challenge 2: AU, and to fill my quill_it prompt tense. WWI trench warfare fic. The day before The Big Push.

( They were going over the top. )

merlin, merlin/arthur, fic

Comments 17

archaeologist_d July 17 2010, 17:44:08 UTC

How sad it was. I loved that we don't know who survived but that they took their pleasure where they could. Well done.

nyargles July 19 2010, 01:07:20 UTC

Thanks very much! You're right, I didn't want to wrap it up completely, heh.

humbuggirl July 17 2010, 19:00:04 UTC

The first couple of lines of the last paragraph really tugged at me. Very sad, and yet very sweet at the same time. Thanks for sharing.

nyargles July 19 2010, 01:08:27 UTC

Thanks very much. :)

itachitachi July 17 2010, 19:00:36 UTC

The results for this challenge have not been posted yet. I suppose there's nothing you can do about it now, but please remember in future not to repost your entries until after results are up. It's not "after voting ends", but "after results".

nyargles July 17 2010, 19:09:09 UTC

Ack... I'm sorry! D: I did check the FAQ, and it didn't say anything at all about it though...?

itachitachi July 17 2010, 19:16:59 UTC

Oh god, the FAQ o__o;; As you may have noticed, it is more an intro to what pornathon WILL be like and not about actual questions you have... I should maybe make a new one. But your mod should have told you in the beginning that entries should be kept anonymous until results have been posted and everyone starts deanoning. Sorry for not making it clear. Just keep it in mind for next time, and next time you have a question that the FAQ doesn't answer, ask your mod.

nyargles July 19 2010, 01:08:48 UTC

Ahhhh okay. >___> Thanks, and sorry again! D:

hermitknut July 17 2010, 23:10:44 UTC

Ohhh, so bittersweet and sad. Wonderful.
HK

nyargles July 19 2010, 01:09:30 UTC

D: *cheers you up* Thanks you!

teaspoonery July 18 2010, 09:50:15 UTC

Omg, this is just too... I don't even know T.T

For some reason I did not read this as something sexual at all, but more as an act of support and caring and just being there for each other. Because of the mood you set in the beginning, I kept imagining them dirty and cold and basically ripped to shreds before they fight the battle to come *g*

but please tell me they survived?

I'm such a sucker for war!fic. *sigh*

nyargles July 19 2010, 01:12:35 UTC

Awww, haha, war!fic makes me cry so much. I wanted to keep the ending vague either way,so you just have to use your imagination like that. XD Thanks for commenting!

teaspoonery July 19 2010, 08:38:06 UTC

>< can you imagine what it's like to actually be into a fandom that deals with war? (aka Band of Brothers and the Pacific). Hnfm. And in my mind... to tell you the truth, I don't think they'd survive.

teaspoonery July 19 2010, 08:38:45 UTC

...wtf @LJ. That was me.

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