Simulation [1/1]

[numptysmeg]

Title: Simulation
Pairing: Junseung
Genre: Smut, Angst, Horror
Rating: NC17
Summary: Junhyung spends every waking hour with a beautiful boy and someone else controlling his body.
Warnings: NonCon
Notes: Ah sorry, first attempt at Angst. I wrote this a while ago and I couldn't think of where to take it. I didn't want to make it a multi-chapter but I didn

Comments

[rain_yayy]

Me likes,, ~~ <3

[numptysmeg]

Thank you~~<3

*gives cookies*

I was worried it was too dark or confusing

[rain_yayy]

yayy,, cookies!

it is a little confusing, that's true, but to me, it isn't bothersome.

where are they anyways?

[numptysmeg]

Well it's based on an idea i had watching gamer. Whilst Gerrard Butler is trying to get himself out of the game, his wife is an 'actress' in a virtual reality game where she's controlled by another person. I figured it's that idea but they've got less control and they're pretty much owned by the player and they live in a house that was created for the game

[lettherebeminho]

this is great, actually. a really unique and thrilling concept.
you did a good job pulling everything together! <3

[numptysmeg]

Ahh thank you!!

I was trying to make it longer but I got blocked and ended up starting something new and now have block on that haha.

I may have to come back to it for a sequel. I have a basic idea for them getting out but it's really sketchy at the moment.

~~~<3

P.S. Do I spy Haemin??

[lettherebeminho]

if you choose to write a sequel, that would be great. but if you leave it like this, that'll be great, too. :P

i have a oneshot that i'm thinking of writing a sequel to. i'm just worried that a) i won't be able to think of anything or b) what i DO come up with won't be as great as the first oneshot.

:D

and Haemin? i'm literally not sure what that is. wutchu talkin bout?

[numptysmeg]

Haemin = kid from that rookie band that has yet to debut 'New School' I think

Oooohh what one shot you working on?

[badoy]

so i guess, they would be enjoying their moment from now on. hrhrhrhr i haven't move on from the soulmates bonus and now this ... /mindfucked. A+ A+ A+ but i really do wonder what will happen to them if they successfully get out of the game.

anyway, gamer was on the other night. now, i regret choosing sleep over it.

[numptysmeg]

Ah gamer was kinda scary. I'm amazed I sat through it although lately I've managed three horror/thriller films so perhaps i'm getting a taste for them 0_0 *is squeamish*

thank you for reading!~~<3

[noodlesyummy]

wooow~
I wish you write more... !!

[numptysmeg]

Ah thank you for reading!

I am considering it but I only have a basic idea for a sequel at the moment. I'm planning to write a third installment of the soulmates stories and I have another drabble based oneshot that's almost finished ^^

thank you again ^^

~~<3

[animefan961]

I'm speechless. Like seriously all that's registering in my brain right now is: OMG, WTF, THIS IS AMAZING, READ IT AGAIN.
Ugh I seriously just love very mysterious stories like this. Though I'm more of a psycho-mindfuck-plottwisty story fan this just tickles my fancy as well XD The vagueness and how they're sort of like playthings. I might just watch the movie you mentioned. I've been watching too many Asian psychological horror/thriller movies lately ._.

[numptysmeg]

Ah thank you for reading ^^

I have an idea for a sequel but I'm not 100% sure if i'll actually write it or not :s I need to work out a few kinks first -__-

Have you seen Kaiji: Ultimate gambler?

~~<3

[animefan961]

Meh don't force yourself to write the sequel if you just aren't feeling the story. I actually would prefer this to be on its own because adding more things to the story is going to complicate it whereas I like the simplicity and subtlety of this (unless you're intending to make this a series/multichapter?). But whatever you want since it's your story lol. Those plot bunnies are quite annoying if they''re in your head for too long.

And no I haven't heard of it. Hopefully its on netflix XD