An open letter to canadian industrial band, ORGASMA.
Hey guys, just posting an open letter quick like about your music. I took the time to listen to your tracks and overall, I think that it's mediocre, with potential to be good.
A few things really quickly here: First off, be careful of how you're putting your message out there, I realize that you want to market as effectively as possible, but saying that your first album is a masterpiece and will change the scene forever is a big jump to START with. Do not take offense, but right now you're guys singing about sex in a scene that's filled with a bunch of guys singing about sex because they don't get enough. You need to be very careful of trying to market with sex, especially when it's just blatently tacked on. Groups like the genitorturers and seraphim shock get away with it because they were shocking when they first came out, but as it stands right now, it looks like you've sort of worked on a few ideas. for the love of god stay away from saying stuff like "you are my sextasy", it's just stupid and makes you look like a dickhead for saying it. Not even David Bowie can say that and get away with it.
Which brings me to my next point: I would very much look into how you're programming and the level of detail you're putting into it. This scene is very unforgiving, and if you want to break out of the us/canadian scene, you will need to spend some time, effort, and money into getting better at what you do. If you don't bother to sound professional, noones going to bother with you. Good luck in what you do, and I hope that you find what you're looking for -Eric
A few things really quickly here: First off, be careful of how you're putting your message out there, I realize that you want to market as effectively as possible, but saying that your first album is a masterpiece and will change the scene forever is a big jump to START with. Do not take offense, but right now you're guys singing about sex in a scene that's filled with a bunch of guys singing about sex because they don't get enough. You need to be very careful of trying to market with sex, especially when it's just blatently tacked on. Groups like the genitorturers and seraphim shock get away with it because they were shocking when they first came out, but as it stands right now, it looks like you've sort of worked on a few ideas. for the love of god stay away from saying stuff like "you are my sextasy", it's just stupid and makes you look like a dickhead for saying it. Not even David Bowie can say that and get away with it.
Which brings me to my next point: I would very much look into how you're programming and the level of detail you're putting into it. This scene is very unforgiving, and if you want to break out of the us/canadian scene, you will need to spend some time, effort, and money into getting better at what you do. If you don't bother to sound professional, noones going to bother with you. Good luck in what you do, and I hope that you find what you're looking for -Eric