If I could tell you 8/?

Jan 22, 2012 06:58


Title:  If I could tell you
Chapter: 8/?
Rating: M
Characters: Puck, Rachel, OC
Word Count: 3600
Summary: Puck and Rachel get another chance when unexpected events bring her to his doorstep years after graduation.

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Jen doesn't like her. )

glee, if i could tell you, puck/rachel

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nova802 January 29 2012, 13:23:02 UTC
Heh! I honestly think I may have made Jen more of a bitch than she really had to be, just for the pleasure of seeing Rachel snipe at her a little. (Oh and Connor getting her dirty!) I absolutely loathe canon Rachel trying so desperately to be friends with that witch Quinn, so I'm probably taking it out on Jen. Oh well, Puckerman does seem to have a thing for the bitchy ones, so I'm probably okay. I will say that I laughed my ass off when I read your comment about Jen marking her territory, because I basically had those exact words in my notes. And yeah, of course Puck is going to know exactly what's going on.

And I'm glad you liked seeing Rachel settle in. One of the things I was really worried about with this story was the idea of Puck rescuing the little lady. She didn't move here for him, he's just a really fantastic bonus.

As you'll see shortly, the next update is all Puck and there's a lot of internal stuff. I hope it all makes sense to you and seems true to the character.

Thanks again for your comments: they are much appreciated!

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