Torchwood: Exorcism

May 22, 2007 22:28

It is all the fault of the fucking French boy.  Or rather, it is all the fault of the French boy Jack is fucking.

Not that Ianto is jealous.  Why would he be?  Not after what happened-not after what Jack did to Lisa.  Not even weeks afterwards, not even when Jack has been so polite, so eager to conquer Ianto’s heart and mind, win him back into the ( Read more... )

18, torchwood, jack/ianto, shameless porn, nc-17

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notevery May 23 2007, 07:53:25 UTC
Thank you so much for the detailed comment! I'm glad to hear that you liked it. As far as Ianto not punching back goes, I was seriously considering it, but ended up (just) not including it, largely because I felt that after the events of Cyberwoman Ianto became, for a while, quiet (though this could just be the impression given by his relatively small amount of screen-time in Small Worlds. Damn lack of Ianto). I also thought that since Ianto didn't expect to get punched, his first reaction would probably be surprise, though perhaps I didn't make that clear enough. I completely agree with what you're saying, though--it's a weakness I can see there too, and though I'm happy with these events (from a writer's POV), if I ever get the time I'd love to write exactly the same beginning leading onto a fistfight and then rough sex with Ianto 'on top'. (Then again, that could just be because it would both a) turn me on and b) fulfill my interest in different timelines/alternate realities/the differences made by single choices ( ... )

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notevery May 23 2007, 08:56:01 UTC
I'm not offended at all! Concrit (and that was definitely constructive, as well as being really considerately phrased) is something I welcome with open arms. I know that not all fanfic authors are writing for the same reasons, and I can totally understand someone who's just having some fun not wanting concrit--but for me fanfic, whilst being fun of course, is also a way for me to practice and improve my writing, and concrit is 100% essential for that. I wish more people were happy giving it! Then again, given the reaction it gets in some places, I can see why people aren't ( ... )

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cyberamanda May 23 2007, 19:53:46 UTC
I said I couldn't wait to read this and it was definitely worth waiting for. As much as I enjoy reading pretty much all Jack/Ianto fics, a lot of them are quite fluffy, which I just don't see Jack and Ianto being. I can see this scenario happening - even placed sometime within season two - because angry sex between these two works. And it's hot! And you wrote it well. I'd love to see you write it as you mentioned - fistfight then rough sex with Ianto topping. That would be awesome :-)

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notevery May 29 2007, 10:45:57 UTC
I'm really glad to hear that you liked it and it was worth the wait! Top!Ianto is haunting me at the moment (there's a serious lack of that, and I'd be the first admit that it shows in my work too) so you might be in luck...

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cyberamanda May 30 2007, 10:13:56 UTC
So pleased to hear it. *grins as looks forward to more top!Ianto fic*

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