Not actually written today

Feb 24, 2004 23:03


Hey, i kind of cheated, i wrote a journal thing while working at the physics building, yesterday, cause i wanted to waste time and not do homework. it probably won't make a whole lot of sense, at times, cause i pretty much just wrote it for my benefit, and so i knew what i was talking about. anyway, good luck, and here it is:

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colormerandom February 25 2004, 10:10:51 UTC
okay. adam. you are long winded. make more paragraphs. that is all. oh, no it's not. if you like her, go for it. she's not your TA, right?

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i'm sneaky not_newton February 25 2004, 11:05:28 UTC
ha, no. and i know... that's two paragraph complaints from you now, i should get the idea... and yes, that was a freakishly long post.

see, my strategy was to make you think "ok, this is kind of boring, i'll stop after this paragraph, before i go back to the real world (inferno)". and then the paragraph NEVER ENDS UNTIL THE END.

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well, i thought i was sneaky... not_newton February 25 2004, 14:36:05 UTC
alright... ...even though i think you understood...

"see, my strategy was to make you think 'ok, this is kind of boring, i'll stop after this paragraph, before i go back to the real world (inferno)'. and then the paragraph NEVER ENDS UNTIL THE END OF THE WHOLE POST."

i think i'm going to go find something to correct in your journal now.

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Re: i'm sneaky colormerandom February 25 2004, 20:44:59 UTC
not boring as long as there are paragraphs. sorry if my post makes me seem like a bitch, but your posts would just be so much easier to read with seperation.

do your sentences get seperation anxiety?

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Re: i'm sneaky not_newton February 25 2004, 23:46:23 UTC
well, they don't really like me to talk about it...

and i understand, i didn't interpret it as bitching. i really do know how to use paragraphs... i promise. but maybe i'm subconciously rebelling from good writing form, due to a hate of writing papers for school. i don't know. i'll do better.

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