Hey, i kind of cheated, i wrote a journal thing while working at the physics building, yesterday, cause i wanted to waste time and not do homework. it probably won't make a whole lot of sense, at times, cause i pretty much just wrote it for my benefit, and so i knew what i was talking about. anyway, good luck, and here it is:
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see, my strategy was to make you think "ok, this is kind of boring, i'll stop after this paragraph, before i go back to the real world (inferno)". and then the paragraph NEVER ENDS UNTIL THE END.
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"see, my strategy was to make you think 'ok, this is kind of boring, i'll stop after this paragraph, before i go back to the real world (inferno)'. and then the paragraph NEVER ENDS UNTIL THE END OF THE WHOLE POST."
i think i'm going to go find something to correct in your journal now.
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do your sentences get seperation anxiety?
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and i understand, i didn't interpret it as bitching. i really do know how to use paragraphs... i promise. but maybe i'm subconciously rebelling from good writing form, due to a hate of writing papers for school. i don't know. i'll do better.
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