Re: First request for beta: 4 Norsekink fills / stand-alone storiespassing_time12June 24 2012, 02:57:01 UTC
I'd love to be of any assistance:D I haven't beta'd much, but I have a lot of time right now so you can expect a turnout quickly (no more than three days), also I'm good with grammar and punctuation.
I have found myself ridiculously bored this summer so I figured why not suck up some of my time and help people as well! If you're in need of a beta, feel free to either PM me or message me at [retteleana@yahoo.com]. I'll look over anything regarding triggers or warnings and such, but prefer to beta slash fills, and at the most would only take me a day or two to get back to you depending on the length! Just thought I would offer to give back in some way (:
Looking for a beta...lokibitch07July 4 2012, 07:29:46 UTC
Title: Hands off Genre: Dark!Fic Pairing, or characters: Loki, Thor Trigger Warning: Gore, Excess Violence, Torture! Type of beta you'd like: grammar, general feedback Length, or word count: 4,300 Short Summary: Answer to prompt: The muzzle and shackles at the end of Avengers were intended to deny Loki access to his magic- no hand movements to channel it, no voice to speak it. In Asgard, it's decided that to remove the threat of Loki ever using his magic again, his lips will be sewn- but then, that might not be enough. So his tongue and vocal chords are removed as well, and so are his hands
I have some other fics that I want to post on AO3, and it would be great if someone can give me some general feedback on them!
Re: Looking for a beta...solaceoftimeJuly 8 2012, 16:37:12 UTC
I would love to be of assistance to you! I have quite a bit of time on my hands and would like to put it to some use. I can have your work beta'd and give you feedback in two days at most.
If you are interested, you can reach me at midknightcow@gmail.com
Title: The Kings Genre: Slash, some dub!con, action. Pairing, or characters: Loki/Thor, offscreen Sif/Heimdall, past Loki/Amora Trigger Warning: some elements of non-con, violence. Type of beta you'd like: A little bit of everything! I'm basing my canon on the movie!verse, but I'm trying to stay fairly true to Norse mythology as well. Length, or word count: It's a WIP on Ao3, up to 9 chapters at the moment about 23,000 words). Short Summary: In an AU in which Loki does not fall into the abyss, Odin returns to the Odinsleep and leaves Thor to rule. But Thor offers Loki the throne, in exchange for complete control of their private relationship. Loki must face his brother's growing predatory urges, and a new threat from an old enemy bent on vengeance.
spit and polish for my first multichaptered fic
anonymous
July 11 2012, 23:12:03 UTC
Title: Untitled (so far) Genre: AU, angst, h/c, occasional fluff Characters: gen, Loki, male OC, Thor, Odin, Frigga Trigger warning: sexual harassment (non-con), violence, racism against Jötnar. Length: WIP, four chapters with 10400 words so far. I'm thinking there will be about three more chapters. Type of Beta I would like: Is it too greedy to ask for everything? I am sure I need some grammar/spelling help, but I would also really appreciate someone critical about plot and expression, maybe characterization and realistic emotional reactions (I'm sending poor Loki on quite a roller coaster and I don't want to risk veering into the pathetic). I like the story so far but I'm sure it could do with some polish. As this is the first story I truly have to think about development I would love a Beta reader who can tell me 'Sorry, but delete this, it doesn't fit at all and the writing is rubbish' (the sorry is optional ;-).
Short summary: A response to a norsekink prompt here. In short: Someone of nobility in Asgard discovers Loki is a
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Genre: Dark!Fic
Pairing, or characters: Loki, Thor
Trigger Warning: Gore, Excess Violence, Torture!
Type of beta you'd like: grammar, general feedback
Length, or word count: 4,300
Short Summary: Answer to prompt:
The muzzle and shackles at the end of Avengers were intended to deny Loki access to his magic- no hand movements to channel it, no voice to speak it.
In Asgard, it's decided that to remove the threat of Loki ever using his magic again, his lips will be sewn- but then, that might not be enough. So his tongue and vocal chords are removed as well, and so are his hands
I have some other fics that I want to post on AO3, and it would be great if someone can give me some general feedback on them!
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If you are interested, you can reach me at midknightcow@gmail.com
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Title: The Kings
Genre: Slash, some dub!con, action.
Pairing, or characters: Loki/Thor, offscreen Sif/Heimdall, past Loki/Amora
Trigger Warning: some elements of non-con, violence.
Type of beta you'd like: A little bit of everything! I'm basing my canon on the movie!verse, but I'm trying to stay fairly true to Norse mythology as well.
Length, or word count: It's a WIP on Ao3, up to 9 chapters at the moment about 23,000 words).
Short Summary: In an AU in which Loki does not fall into the abyss, Odin returns to the Odinsleep and leaves Thor to rule. But Thor offers Loki the throne, in exchange for complete control of their private relationship. Loki must face his brother's growing predatory urges, and a new threat from an old enemy bent on vengeance.
Thank you!
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Genre: AU, angst, h/c, occasional fluff
Characters: gen, Loki, male OC, Thor, Odin, Frigga
Trigger warning: sexual harassment (non-con), violence, racism against Jötnar.
Length: WIP, four chapters with 10400 words so far. I'm thinking there will be about three more chapters.
Type of Beta I would like: Is it too greedy to ask for everything? I am sure I need some grammar/spelling help, but I would also really appreciate someone critical about plot and expression, maybe characterization and realistic emotional reactions (I'm sending poor Loki on quite a roller coaster and I don't want to risk veering into the pathetic). I like the story so far but I'm sure it could do with some polish. As this is the first story I truly have to think about development I would love a Beta reader who can tell me 'Sorry, but delete this, it doesn't fit at all and the writing is rubbish' (the sorry is optional ;-).
Short summary: A response to a norsekink prompt here. In short: Someone of nobility in Asgard discovers Loki is a ( ... )
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