Mistakes, a cookie

Apr 21, 2008 17:14

Craning her neck to look at the clock on the bedside table behind Nicholas, she blinked a few times when she read that it was 7:45.

“Shit!” she cried out, accidentally elbowing Nicholas in the ribs.

He woke up immediately while Victor, who slept like the dead, rested on. “Geez, Nina,” Nicholas said, stretching. “That’s a hell of a way to wake ( Read more... )

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vexed_wench April 21 2008, 21:30:18 UTC
I love Nina this was a great cookie.

I loved how Roy was Fuhrer Mustang and Nina's father in law and man if that aint a scary combo I don't know what is.

Poor Nina that people think she is the outsider the boys do love and desire her as much as each other.

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nomdeplume13 April 21 2008, 21:32:21 UTC
Thanks. I figure she and everyone else deserves it, since she still felt so much like an outsider for so many.
Glad you enjoyed it.

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FROM MOUSE1010 anonymous April 25 2008, 05:01:30 UTC
I’d like to note that even on here amongst primarily female readers (and I would assume fairly liberal since they love gay porn), I have noticed that with this triad, the people dislike Nina before either male. This is, I must conclude, simply because she is female. She has no real dislikable characteristics. In fact, at least in the cookies, she has much more personality than Victor. Never mind that anime-wise she is one of the favorite minor characters, and most people would kill to see her happy. I guess kill to see her happy in any way but this ( ... )

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Re: FROM MOUSE1010 nomdeplume13 April 25 2008, 05:05:47 UTC
Yeah. Some of it is there were a lot rooting for Nicholas and Victor together, I think, so Nina intruded. And heaven knows women can be the only people responsible for birth control *rolls eyes*
But I would be curious what would happen if someone intruded on Aideen and Fletcher, not that either of them swing the other way at all, but still...
Anywho, thanks for the support on this.

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Re: FROM MOUSE1010 anonymous April 25 2008, 05:15:14 UTC
Always. It just seemed painful to me when I read Nina obviously dealing with the same issues you're dealing with as a writer.

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Re: FROM MOUSE1010 nomdeplume13 April 25 2008, 05:19:09 UTC
Eh. It's kind of what this whole thing was written for, a sort of explanation.

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amethyst_koneko April 26 2008, 05:07:46 UTC
Title: Mistakes. Sub-title: Our Actions Have Consequences! :D Seems to me that both the second lieutentant and Nina have learn a lesson here. The second lieutenant now knows that if you act a fool to the fuhrer's sorta kinda daughter-in-law, you may suddenly find yourself serving the military in an outpost so forlorn that it makes the Briggs Mountains look like Disneyland! XD Nina has learned that if you put yourself in the line of fire by dating a celebrity (i.e. Nicholas) that you will have to suffer the slings and arrows of public scrutiny. The fact that her dating resulted in a rather unconventional threesome doesn't help her rep at all. The public will latch on to anything out of the norm and gossip about and critique it to death. To many, she will probably always be seen as the booty call who never left. But that's the price you pay when the things you do fly in the face of the public's "fine sensibilities"! :D

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vexed_wench April 26 2008, 20:03:15 UTC
I like Nina not just because she has Wrath in her , she is a good strong person. I personally think the three of them complement each other very well.

It is nice that they are all equals the boys don't "share and trade " Nina or bounce her from bed to bed.

Even if Kain and Frank weren't her fathers I would still adore her.

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secretfreaky April 29 2008, 11:48:17 UTC
This is marvelous. I love how protective the boys and Roy are towards Nina. Great cookie!

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