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Fic: Afterglow Fading

Apr 03, 2009 19:20

Title: Afterglow Fading
Summary: Elle is paying the price for loving a married man.
Rating: R for language
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Heroes is not owned by me, but by Tim Kring. I’m simply borrowing these characters for non-profit entertainment.

( I'm naming him Noah )

Comments 6

half_stack April 4 2009, 01:52:26 UTC

AHHH KICKASS ENDING!!!!!
Very well written, in character which is always a major plus :)

josiefier April 4 2009, 01:57:33 UTC

Thank you! :D Yes, there need to be more Noelle babies in fanfiction :nod:

Woohoo! I'm never sure they're in character until people tell me half the time lol. But yeah, I did really try with this one. So glad you liked it :D

half_stack April 4 2009, 02:27:59 UTC

“Yes. And you should at least be comforted in knowing that I don’t sleep with my wife. That is yours. Only yours. And whether you believe it or not, I do love you. If circumstances were different you would be the one to have me whenever you wanted me but this is what we have. This is what we are. We’re partners, we’re lovers and at least for the foreseeable future that’s all we may be. I’m sorry that it’s not enough for you, but know that this is just as hard for me as it is for you and it kills me to see you like this and know there’s not a damn thing I can do about it.”

That lengthy speech sold it for me. It's like it came straight out of his mouth. I find it difficult to write angtsy dialogue and have it not be too over the top, but that was very in character!

josiefier April 4 2009, 02:29:18 UTC

Well thank you :D I feel the need to bow lol And now for my next "trick" - fairy tales ;)

dref22 April 4 2009, 21:08:37 UTC

Guuuuuuuh the ending!!!!! Killed me!!!!!!

josiefier April 4 2009, 22:10:42 UTC

Well then I'll say thank you to your corpse LOL! So glad you liked it :D