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"That's my... my beer"

Jun 06, 2011 14:04

Today's episode begins with Reid meeting Bob at the Lakeview for more of Mona Cross's dog and pony show. Reid is not happy about it, and he attempts to kill Bob with his eyeballs.

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these drama queens are mfeo, bob has a man crush on reid, nuke ends forever! \o/, i am luke hear me roar, crazy oakdale shenanigans, katie is banana to reid's peanut butter, luke's face, luke/reid rewatch, luke gets his drama on, reid has frown face, comment fic, luke and reid need to touch, luke has bitch face

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rhiannonhero June 6 2011, 04:42:50 UTC

For whatever reason, I kind of love that during the scenes with Noah and Luke, you just know that Noah thinks that Reid and Luke have totally fucked already. I have always wanted to write a Noah POV where he's completely jealous about that, making himself miserable imagining them fucking, angry that Reid "used" Luke for his money and his ass and then tossed him away. (Never really getting, of course, that he'd basically done the same thing the entire time he was with Luke.)

I started one once, but didn't get very far with it.

nancygrew June 6 2011, 04:50:52 UTC

OMG! You have a lot on your plate and I'm always grateful for the stories you write so I would never ever be rude enough to try to pressure you into writing something. This idea is awesome. Even if you never get around to writing it, thanks for letting me think about it.

rhiannonhero June 6 2011, 04:52:29 UTC

Aw, that's sweet of you to say! :) I was actually thinking I'd post the unfinished snippet I did write here in the comments, but I can't find it! It must be on my other computer!

rhiannonhero June 6 2011, 04:59:45 UTC

It's not very exciting (or good) but this is what I wrote. If anyone wanted to expand on it, I'd be thrilled!

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Noah’s never experienced jealousy like this. It burns in his gut, and makes his heart hurt so badly that he wishes that it would just stop beating. He turns every moment of that conversation in Java over and over in his head, wondering just what Luke meant by the comment that Reid was a ‘user’, that he got what he needed and then Luke was expendable. Had he…had they? Had Reid gotten that? Had Reid had Luke naked, arms open, legs spread and - ? Oh, God. He wants to throw up. He presses his hand to his head and swallows it back. They must have. It’s the only thing Noah can imagine that would leave Luke like…this, leave him looking so lost and despondent, make his face that vulnerable and broken. God, Reid is an ass! To use Luke like that, to take something so precious and special, and then just - unless…unless it’s not just that at all. Unless Luke’s falling in love. With that jerk? Noah doesn’t understand ( ... )

nancygrew June 6 2011, 05:04:20 UTC

I'm so happy you posted this! I really enjoyed it.

He'd been waiting to be whole again, waiting to come back to Luke healed and right, and now Luke’s exposing his body, maybe his heart to this creep? This was a great sentence. It actually gave Noah's actions some motive and sense and made me feel a little sorry for him.

rhiannonhero June 6 2011, 05:06:48 UTC

I started to feel a bit sorry for him, too, but then remembered that I hate him, and was super happy that he was jealous and in pain and hoped that it HURT.

I AM MEAN TO FICTIONAL CHARACTERS WHO ARE DOUCHES TO LUKE SNYDER!!! ;)

mech_bull June 6 2011, 12:26:37 UTC

Loved it - and this is why! Hahaha! SUFFER, NOAH! SUFFER!

greek_09 June 6 2011, 17:38:19 UTC

Yep. Douchey should be suffering for the REST OF HIS LIFE after what he did to our Luke.

Feel the pain Noah. FEEL THE PAIN.

dpracket June 6 2011, 05:15:47 UTC

I think Noah *would* assume that they had slept together. :)

(because it would be natural to assume that of two, healthy young men who are into each other...stupid show)

Thanks for sharing this!

_alicesprings June 6 2011, 07:00:41 UTC

Loooooooove this!

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