Oops, I did it AGAIN XD

Sep 12, 2009 16:01

Title: Carving Out A Moment
Fandom: Star Trek XI
Pairing: Kirk/ Spock
Rating: R / NC-17 (maybe, I dunno)
Summary: Written for the kink meme prompt : Kirk/Spock. Established relationship. Kirk spends a not-so-busy day on the bridge getting constantly distracted by thoughts of Spock. Memories, fantasies, I-can't-wait-tills, all of the above. Maybe ( Read more... )

carving out a moment, writing??, star trek, fanfic, we can't stop here-this is porn country!

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love_toall November 16 2009, 23:50:34 UTC
I am WOOHOOing right along with you. I love how Jim slowly begins to realize his feelings for Spock are changing.

Great job.

edited for spelling fail

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nix_this November 16 2009, 23:51:46 UTC
Thank you :)

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nix_this November 17 2009, 00:02:01 UTC
ROFL. Ah, spelling fail. Seriously, proof read the story again and I promise you will not feel alone ;)

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ilcocoabean November 17 2009, 01:36:44 UTC
Okay, someone explain to me, why this only has three comments? I already read this on the kink meme but re-reading it here make me smile even more. ♥

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nix_this November 17 2009, 01:56:57 UTC
Heh. Heh.

Funny story about that. When I wrote this (waaaay back in September ;) ) I wasn't posting any of my stories on my own journal because I wasn't out of the trekkie fic writing fangirl closet. I mean, my SISTER reads this journal sometimes and a few other people who I didn't think were quite ready to know that not only was I into boy on boy action but I was actively writing it XD Flash forward a couple of weeks and I decided "Fuck it. The warnings are there, I HAVE NO SHAME."

So this fic was posted in it's entirety at the Kirk/Spock Slash Community before it made it over here. XD

Thanks for the great comment, I'm glad this makes you smile (I admit, I'm pretty happy with it too XD)

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nix_this November 18 2009, 04:28:00 UTC
*grin*
I'm glad you liked it. Shower sex is always good. Slightly schmoopy tender shower sex is something else entirely XD

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daybreaq November 17 2009, 06:31:00 UTC
Sweet and hot at the same time! That's quite a feat! I really enjoyed this. I also appreciate you deal with that initial "rocky start." Nothing against "already established relationship" stories; but I generally feel getting there is half the fun. It's not always necessary to go heavily into it; it's nice to get at least a sense of how they got there though and you do this very well. This is a very well written, and well balanced story ( ... )

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nix_this November 17 2009, 06:38:34 UTC
And hudda duh XD You learned me something :) That's awesome! Thanks for pointing it out, it is a word I've learned through context as has been taken to mean vulnerable, not uh..incredibly flexible ;).
*grin* Feel free to do this to any one of my stories !

Also, that part where you called it balanced and well written? ~<3 Carted blanche in that too ;)

Thanks so much for the great feedback!

*dashes of the correct the errors or her ways - STAT*

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vicki_rae November 17 2009, 06:56:11 UTC
Love this. It's wonderful and I memmed it.

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nix_this November 18 2009, 04:28:43 UTC
*hug*

I'm glad~! Thank you :)

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