New fic: First (Unspoken series, chapter 16 )

[nipponophile05]

Ah, it's been a while, over a month actually, since I last posted a chapter for this series, and I apologise for the delay in getting to you this (according to some) "much-anticipated" installment. Real life, job and all that. I hope you enjoy the chapter.

Title: First
Characters/pairing: Tenth Doctor and Donna
Genre: Romance
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer:

Comments

[time_converges]

Oooh, I love this little interlude, just the two of them able to enjoy being married at last. Also, lovely and hot and intimate, too!!

[nipponophile05]

Glad you enjoyed this, although I'm sure you didn't enjoy reading about as much as they enjoyed doing.....what you read about.

I'm happy that the hotness came across too, as up to now I have focused mostly on intimate only.

[motoko1969]

*turns into a big puddle of goo*
Wow... this was just Brilliant !!!

Amazing job, and the Japanese touch is just perfect in there *guh*

[nipponophile05]

*brings bucket and mop to assist in clean-up*

So happy you liked it, and in particular that the Japanese-ness worked for you.

I was being a BIT biased, as my kind of Heaven would be a LOT like Japan.....

[sykira]

The Doctor slid open the shoji door and then, unexpectedly, bent to pick Donna up, causing her to squeal involuntarily in surprise even as a slight smile - he’s quite the traditionalist, my Spaceman - graced her lips as he carried her over the threshold. Once through, he gently lowered her to her feet and slung an arm around her shoulders to pull her closer. She wrapped her hands around his waist and snuggled into his chest. Then they just stood, surveying their surrounds, with only the summer song of cicadas breaking through the silence.

Any other time, Donna would have described this room as just about perfect - the decoration was restrained and unobtrusive, the same type of flowers that had been in her bridal bouquet stood in a small alcove and were infusing the room with their calming, other-worldly fragrance, while a washi lantern cast a soft, intimate glow throughout. The fluffy cloud of a futon that had been laid out on the tatami looked comfortable and inviting...OH HECK YES! Now that's scene setting! Wow, stunningly

[sykira]

oooh and him asking permission to make her robe disappear, LOVE that &hearts

[nipponophile05]

*Phew*

I'm very chuffed that you like the added scene setting. When I get married, I want to find a room/garden/planet like this for me and hubby to honeymoon in....

[katherine_b]

Ah, very hot and sexy. Love it!

[nipponophile05]

I was definitely going for hot and sexy, so YAY! that that came across.

So pleased that you loved, hope you'll love the Doctor's POV as well.

[bas_math_girl]

*happy sigh* This was heavenly! There's no other way to describe it.

[nipponophile05]

Heavenly is pretty high praise in my book. I'll take it!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!!!