The Feeling you Get. Part 2.2
Title: The Feeling you get.
Author: Luna Valentine
Band(s)/pairing(s): the Gazette again. / some random sue
Rating on how bad it is: On a scale of 1-10, I'd give it a 8. Everyone's so OOC,, and the OC totally reeks of Mary-Sue qualities.The grammar’s pretty bad too.
Origin: AFF.net!
I say/Notes: Hmm. This story is centered around a girl that they apparently know, and treat like a sister. She's really close to Aoi, and well...in this fic, his characterization needs a lot to be desired. Chapter 1 can be found here.
‘Aoi-san, how come Ew you don’t seem to be thrilled about tonight as the others?’ The lady asked finally.
Aoi had zoned out of the interview after five minutes because of all of the pretty lights, giving his fullest attention at the window, where he could see people passing by as he waited for Rei.
Reita: You’d think that an interviewer would comprehend the importance of having correct grammar.
Ruki: Lives are like, the best thing in the entire world! Why would you not be thrilled?
Aoi: You see, I had a very elaborate trap set up involving a pulley system and deep holes and/or the MCHMP is screwing up my mind in such a way, I’m loosing all connections to reality.
Cut for pointless boring ass conversation, and they wait for the sue! Aoi has a headache!
Aoi: Headache? Try fucking migraine.
Uruha: People in today’s society baffle me.
Wait till Rei gets-‘ Uruha began when Rei walked into the café naked. ‘Wait, she’s here.’ He smiled, waving at Rei and thinking she looked hideous, who smiled back as she made her way to their table, to sit on the seat previously occupied by the interview lady, next to Reita.
Ruki: Uruha! Why did you show her where we were?
Uruha: I did nothing of the sort!
Reita: If she touches me, I will end you.
Uruha: I have no control over the apocalypse and cannot be held responsible for what happens when it is near.
Question.’ Rei said. ‘I was thinking, on the way here… what the hell do I wear on stage?’ She asked. ‘You’re all going to be in fancy clothes, I have none.’ She chuckled.
Aoi: I guess that means she can't come on stage. Oh well.
Ruki: Oh happy day!
More cut!
Guys…’ Rei said. ‘I have the sudden urge to feed the lot of you chocolate cake! .’ She grinned. ‘How about I cook something?’
‘Yes!’ Kai stood up in excitement - it had been so long since she’s cooked for them. She used to be their dedicated cook before Kai.
‘Ah, home cooking other than Kai’s…’ Reita laughed. ‘I can’t say no to that…’
Uruha: I don't want anything from the MCHMP that isn't loaded with Vitamin C
Aoi: I don't want anything from her at all.
Reita: I'd take Kai's food over hers.
Kai: Hey!
Reita: It's a compliment.
Uruha: No it's not. And I'd take scurvy over the apocalypse.
‘Welcome to Rei’s little rat house palace.’ Rei opened the door to her apartment.
Aoi held the door open so she could lead them into a wonderful place in the sky!.
Ruki: Push her!
Uruha: Making us al laugh!
All: *Imagine it happening and burst out laughing*
Aoi: Oh wow. That‘s the best imagery in this whole entire fic. *Wipes tear from eye*
She tells Kai to gets ingredients, and she goes to get some more. What?
Just get out what you need or want, and need, and want, and need, and want,’ She said, getting ready to leave again.
‘You want some company with the air?’ Aoi asked as she got to the door.
Aoi: Then pushed her down the stairs, the sound of her body dropping heavily throughout the house was music to my ears.
Reita: There was much rejoicing.
Guess what? Uruha gets jelly because Aoi stole his girl!
Uruha: What? Oh Please. You can keep her.
Aoi: *Shakes head vigorously no*
Aoi tries to start a pointless conversation on their way to the store! She works in a music shop, which he thinks is cool.
Aoi: My conversations are not pointless.
Kai: In this fic they definitely are.
There were no hard feelings between them. None of them could ever hold such negativity towards one another.
Aoi: That's because I'm not holding it, it is emanating from my very being.
Uruha: You mean like-
Aoi: I hate you.
Aoi followed her out of the elevator and thinking that this was all a nightmare, and that he had better things in his life to worry about before walking alongside her as they headed out of the building. ‘What was I thinking?’ He smiled.
Aoi: Right?
Uruha: I wouldn’t be surprised if a cop came along with a German Shepherd and bit her.
Aoi: OR the German Shepherd sniffed out some drugs she was carrying in her purse. The cop would most likely arrest her!
Reita: And you. For fraternizing with the enemy.
Kai: Well there goes the end of the GazettE.
Aoi: DAMMIT! SHE’S THE FUCKING PIRATE! NOT ME!
Ruki: Tell that to the cops.
Three paragraphs of them walking and talking and just blah!
‘I know what you’re thinking.’ She smiled knowingly to the air.
Kai: Well, since no one's actually said anything so far...
Ruki: Really?
Kai: Still no quotation marks.
Reita: So we're all... telepathic?
Uruha: It would seem that way.
Ruki: Awesome!
Aoi: No, not Awesome. This means the MCHMP can read our minds too.
Ruki: ... I want out of this. I'm scared.
Uruha: So you should be.
He followed her around the little grocery shop, carrying the items she was purchasing whilst wondering why did she leave from where she originally came from, though for the moment he remained light hearted about the matter. He was with her at the moment reluctantly, so for the moment all is fine.
Uruha: Ah, keep your enemies close. Good strategy, Aoi.
Aoi: Keep your pimp hand strong?
Reita: ... What?
Aoi: Sorry, I was trying to get rid of my horror with humor.
Ruki: Did it work?
Aoi: ... No.
She cooks and they eat in the living room! Idle chit chat time!
‘So Rei, how come Again. Ew. you moved to this district?’ Reita asked as they ate.
She shifted a little to the left, to the right, and backwards!, uncomfortable with the question. ‘Um…’
‘Reita, it’s really none of our business.’ Aoi said calmly.
Ruki: Yeah, Reita. Quit asking worthwhile questions in order to find out why your friend up and vanished and you didn't see her for six years!
Reita: I. Was never friends. With that.
Kai: I think it's a good thing Aoi deflected the question.
Uruha: I think it would be an even better thing if our questions were being deflected by us not being there.
‘I left because I needed a change. Why? The reason is personal, I’m afraid that’s all I can tell you guys.’ She said bluntly.
Aoi: Woah. Snappy.
Reita: I'm sorry miss, I'll never ask another question again so long as I live.
Uruha: That's 100 lines.
Reita: What? WHY?!
Uruha: Because. THE APOCALYPSE.
But guess what? She tells them anyway! She worked with Ruka, because she was looking for a job.
‘Whatever, I still bet by the end of tonight you’ll be begging for the job.’ Kai laughed.
Ruki: And then we'll laugh and point at you from behind our security guards.
Kai: Don't you think-
Uruha: You're right, it's not enough.
Aoi: Electric fence?
Uruha: And guard dogs.
I thought I’d take the job to steal puppies, instead of hanging around you guys jobless.’ She smiled. ‘No offence.’
‘None taken, but we offered you a job, remember, to be the lyric co-writer with Ruki in bizarro world .’ Kai argued.
‘Kai, we’ve been through this before,’ she looked away from Aoi, who now had his eyes on her and the ceiling, watching her longingly like a cat who wants milk. ‘I’m just not cut out for that sort of life.
Aoi: I could have told you that!
Ruki: But you didn’t! Instead you told her to tag along with us! She’s nothing but an annoying itch that you can’t scratch.
'You don’t know till you try.’ Ruki smiled.
‘After tonight, you’ll have a taste of what it’s like to want to kill yourself, the job is still open.’ Uruha said.
‘Thanks, but I think I’ll stick to the floor with the crummy music shop life.’ She chuckled.
All: *clap and applaud*
Uruha: Good! Now keep it up!
Kai: Great Uruha. You just jinxed it.
‘Whatever, I still bet by the end of tonight you’ll be begging for the job and then regretting it.’ Kai laughed.
Aoi: What job?
Uruha: Exactly. Hey look! Ending notes!
P.S forgive the ramblings, it seems to drag on at the moment like a crappy porno movie, but this is how it was played out in my mind and I wanted to share it with everyone. Yay!., and I wanted things to be unraveled like yarn, and take some time to go to grammar school and actually pay attention slowly as to why Rei left and things, . this I hope builds the tension between her and Aoi (and the air Uruha). If you think about it Which we all didn’t, little moments between the two, which seems unnecessary Which they are, are really another step towards what’s to come.
Ruki: I’m really not liking the word tension.
Kai: Yeah. Now She’ll have Uruha and Aoi fight over her.
Uruha and Aoi:..
Chapter 3