this comment is going to be really long and draggy - i'll apologize beforehand
I really love this ending YongSeo piece. It's... Beautiful, honestly. There isn't another word to describe it. You got all of their characters set perfectly and I absolutely looooove it. :)
“It’ll be okay, hyung.” Jonghyun manages to emit haltingly, but his forehead painfully creases and his throat clenches as Yonghwa nods, because behind it all, there’re so many things; tears threatening to overflow, a soul on the verge of evaporating and a heart fissuring and exploding into pieces that are too small to ever be gathered again.
my bias is showing I really like how during this saddening Yonghwa moment, I guess... Jonghyun seemed to be the only to know and not know what to say, you know? And Jungshin and Minhyuk are absolutely adorable trying to be helpful. XD
(His fingers tremble, his heart palpitates and the world spins; he sinks down into a bare, broken heap on the floor, letting cold tears soak his shirt and he feels himself drowning in his bandmates’ tight embrace.
Don’t be okay, hyung, chokes out Minhyuk and Yonghwa doesn’t bother to ask him what it means because he knows-if he’s okay, it means he’s forgotten.)
HE'S CRYING and now I want to cry too. Just, Yonghwa on the floor with tears pouring out of his eyes is really the saddest image I could possibly ever have. It's just horrible. And that last part, of what Minhyuk said? It's so, so, soooo true. I totally understand what he means by it, and it just... agh, it just breaks my heart.
There’s a rush that nearly knocks her off her feet before Seohyun stumbles into the older woman’s bony arms and chokes out a barely audible unnie before she collapses in a pile of tumbling words, streaming tears and sharp fingers clutching for something to hold onto.
First, Yonghwa cried, and I'm already about to die, and then my Seohyun breaks and really... My heart is torn into little pieces and littered all over the floor. I'm so heartbroken right now. For Jessica, too. It's really sad how neither of them can break, one being leader and the other being maknae who doesn't show feelings of heartbreak. It's horrible. :(
Yonghwa slips his hand into hers (slipping his heart into her hand, basically) and whispers, “I love you.”
She doesn’t say the same, but she squeezes his hand (giving him his heart back because she can’t keep it) and nods at his words.
She can't keep it, and I think that's what makes this the saddest thing. They can't be together and they both know it and yet they're forced to hug and kiss on this show where nothing is real and it really just makes me mad and sad and frustrated all at the same time. -_-
Seohyun doesn’t know where that suggestion came from, and she’s sure it’s not a date since they couldn’t go back to square one, but she thinks it’s okay anyway, because he smiles and nods and says he’ll take her to the coffee shop near his dorm.
There won’t be a second date, but they’ve never really had a first one, or a last one, so this could be it.)
I think my favorite part of you writing this was the fact that even though it sounded really angsty and a horrible ending, there was this, and even though it's not really going back to square one, it's... It's the ending to start a new beginning, if you know what I'm trying to say by that. XD I don't know, I'm just glad this was the ending and not:
Pressing a chaste kiss to his cheek, Seohyun then stands up before leaving the room, without looking back.
because even though I loved the line, it would've left Seohyun heartbroken and my poor Yonghwa even more heartbroken and I don't think I could deal with that. :(
Okay, so I'm finally done rambling on and on in my comment, and so I'll end it with a thank you. Thank you so much for writing, I honestly am so glad that someone has made YongSeo that has a happier ending rather than they totally break apart and never see each other again. XD So, thank you.
Oh, dear me. I've never received such a long comment before and I feel all tingly, TBH. XD Would you believe me if I say that I've never watched one 'We Got Married' episode with YongSeo? Seriously, I haven't, but somehow the feelings I feel for them are just so strong. I was so heartbroken when I heard the news that they were going to end it on the show. :/ And really, your comment made my day. I've never felt so, um, loved? LOL. I'm glad I'm able to present this to you and I'm even gladder that you like it! Thank you so much for the amazing feedback. ♥
I really love this ending YongSeo piece. It's... Beautiful, honestly. There isn't another word to describe it. You got all of their characters set perfectly and I absolutely looooove it. :)
“It’ll be okay, hyung.” Jonghyun manages to emit haltingly, but his forehead painfully creases and his throat clenches as Yonghwa nods, because behind it all, there’re so many things; tears threatening to overflow, a soul on the verge of evaporating and a heart fissuring and exploding into pieces that are too small to ever be gathered again.
my bias is showing I really like how during this saddening Yonghwa moment, I guess... Jonghyun seemed to be the only to know and not know what to say, you know? And Jungshin and Minhyuk are absolutely adorable trying to be helpful. XD
(His fingers tremble, his heart palpitates and the world spins; he sinks down into a bare, broken heap on the floor, letting cold tears soak his shirt and he feels himself drowning in his bandmates’ tight embrace.
Don’t be okay, hyung, chokes out Minhyuk and Yonghwa doesn’t bother to ask him what it means because he knows-if he’s okay, it means he’s forgotten.)
HE'S CRYING and now I want to cry too. Just, Yonghwa on the floor with tears pouring out of his eyes is really the saddest image I could possibly ever have. It's just horrible. And that last part, of what Minhyuk said? It's so, so, soooo true. I totally understand what he means by it, and it just... agh, it just breaks my heart.
There’s a rush that nearly knocks her off her feet before Seohyun stumbles into the older woman’s bony arms and chokes out a barely audible unnie before she collapses in a pile of tumbling words, streaming tears and sharp fingers clutching for something to hold onto.
First, Yonghwa cried, and I'm already about to die, and then my Seohyun breaks and really... My heart is torn into little pieces and littered all over the floor. I'm so heartbroken right now. For Jessica, too. It's really sad how neither of them can break, one being leader and the other being maknae who doesn't show feelings of heartbreak. It's horrible. :(
Yonghwa slips his hand into hers (slipping his heart into her hand, basically) and whispers, “I love you.”
She doesn’t say the same, but she squeezes his hand (giving him his heart back because she can’t keep it) and nods at his words.
She can't keep it, and I think that's what makes this the saddest thing. They can't be together and they both know it and yet they're forced to hug and kiss on this show where nothing is real and it really just makes me mad and sad and frustrated all at the same time. -_-
Seohyun doesn’t know where that suggestion came from, and she’s sure it’s not a date since they couldn’t go back to square one, but she thinks it’s okay anyway, because he smiles and nods and says he’ll take her to the coffee shop near his dorm.
There won’t be a second date, but they’ve never really had a first one, or a last one, so this could be it.)
I think my favorite part of you writing this was the fact that even though it sounded really angsty and a horrible ending, there was this, and even though it's not really going back to square one, it's... It's the ending to start a new beginning, if you know what I'm trying to say by that. XD I don't know, I'm just glad this was the ending and not:
Pressing a chaste kiss to his cheek, Seohyun then stands up before leaving the room, without looking back.
because even though I loved the line, it would've left Seohyun heartbroken and my poor Yonghwa even more heartbroken and I don't think I could deal with that. :(
Okay, so I'm finally done rambling on and on in my comment, and so I'll end it with a thank you. Thank you so much for writing, I honestly am so glad that someone has made YongSeo that has a happier ending rather than they totally break apart and never see each other again. XD So, thank you.
♥, bollywoodrecord
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