this comment is going to be really long and draggy - i'll apologize beforehand
I really love this ending YongSeo piece. It's... Beautiful, honestly. There isn't another word to describe it. You got all of their characters set perfectly and I absolutely looooove it. :)
“It’ll be okay, hyung.” Jonghyun manages to emit haltingly, but his forehead painfully creases and his throat clenches as Yonghwa nods, because behind it all, there’re so many things; tears threatening to overflow, a soul on the verge of evaporating and a heart fissuring and exploding into pieces that are too small to ever be gathered again.
my bias is showing I really like how during this saddening Yonghwa moment, I guess... Jonghyun seemed to be the only to know and not know what to say, you know? And Jungshin and Minhyuk are absolutely adorable trying to be helpful. XD
(His fingers tremble, his heart palpitates and the world spins; he sinks down into a bare, broken heap on the floor, letting cold tears soak his shirt and he feels himself drowning in his bandmates
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Oh, dear me. I've never received such a long comment before and I feel all tingly, TBH. XD Would you believe me if I say that I've never watched one 'We Got Married' episode with YongSeo? Seriously, I haven't, but somehow the feelings I feel for them are just so strong. I was so heartbroken when I heard the news that they were going to end it on the show. :/ And really, your comment made my day. I've never felt so, um, loved? LOL. I'm glad I'm able to present this to you and I'm even gladder that you like it! Thank you so much for the amazing feedback. ♥
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH now you've made be all sad again because yongseo is ending TT TT at this point in time, they seem alot real-er than the khuntoria couple, and great writing, as usual. TT your writing seems to be becoming even better and better TT
There are so many quotes that just, tug at my heartstrings, ones that when I read, a little bulb literally appeared at the side of my head that signals, 'ah this is exactly what I think of them'. This is SUCH a beautiful piece, was kinda scared to read it at first TBH because I knew it isn't going to be a happy ending fluff but wow did I not regret I read it
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I swear, you readers are spoiling me with all the long comments! I agree with what you said about the holding hands thing; the simplest things become big when they have something to do with them. Thank you soooooo much for the comment!
i just hope this would not be happening.. i know they'll be able to keep in touch despite their busy schedule, because it's YongSeo after all... it's still not too late to start a new beginning because they are still young and i hope after few years, they'll be able to voice out their feelings to each other.. (but then, the faster the better..maybe, they had confessed already? who knows~~ )
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I really love this ending YongSeo piece. It's... Beautiful, honestly. There isn't another word to describe it. You got all of their characters set perfectly and I absolutely looooove it. :)
“It’ll be okay, hyung.” Jonghyun manages to emit haltingly, but his forehead painfully creases and his throat clenches as Yonghwa nods, because behind it all, there’re so many things; tears threatening to overflow, a soul on the verge of evaporating and a heart fissuring and exploding into pieces that are too small to ever be gathered again.
my bias is showing I really like how during this saddening Yonghwa moment, I guess... Jonghyun seemed to be the only to know and not know what to say, you know? And Jungshin and Minhyuk are absolutely adorable trying to be helpful. XD
(His fingers tremble, his heart palpitates and the world spins; he sinks down into a bare, broken heap on the floor, letting cold tears soak his shirt and he feels himself drowning in his bandmates ( ... )
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But you know what the best part was?
She doesn’t say the same, but she squeezes his hand (giving him his heart back because she can’t keep it) and nods at his words.
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i just hope this would not be happening..
i know they'll be able to keep in touch despite their busy schedule, because it's YongSeo after all...
it's still not too late to start a new beginning because they are still young and i hope after few years, they'll be able to voice out their feelings to each other.. (but then, the faster the better..maybe, they had confessed already? who knows~~ )
thanks so much chinggu~~ ^^
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