Okay I don't know if I did this one justice. I really like the Al POV, not sold on the Ed POV. ConCrit is appreciated.

Title: Shades of Grey (sequel to No More Yielding but a Dream)
Pairing: Elricest
Word count: 1932
Rating: PG-13? R?
Summary:
(  When his nights were not filled with nightmares of his past he was haunted by enticing visions of pale skin and dark gold hair. )

I totally dreamed the beginning of this the day before last. I actually woke up with the first paragraph written and running through my head yesterday. Then I remembered there'd been a prompt on the kink meme.

Title: No more yielding but a dream...
Fandom: FMA
Pairing: Elricest
Word count: 2,709
Rating: NC-17
Summary:someone on the FMA kink meme ( Read more... )

           
( Ed swallowed an exasperated sigh, trust his brother to let guilt stop him from enjoying something. )