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Danny Zuko 20: Uh, Oh Those Summer Nights

Aug 10, 2010 12:43

Title: Danny Zuko was a Hot Chick (part 20 of 20)
Author: Alsike
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over
Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss
Rating: NC-17
AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.
Word Count: 2546
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criminal minds, summer, nc-17, x-men, au, citrus taste, emma/emily

Comments 11

mayireadtoday August 10 2010, 17:04:44 UTC

Oh Emma, you have so many issues: “And if you still remember me, after all of that, after you’re an adult, with a life, and free. Then I’ll trust you. Then I will let myself need you. But not until then.”

Hilarious, I love Elizabeth: “Oh, Emily.” She found a clean handkerchief and gave it to her. “Cold water,” she instructed. “It will make you feel better.” She shook her head. “Honestly, the stewardesses are going to think I beat you.”

I loved this fic. I really want to see a sequel where they're all grown up and meet again.

katiepult August 10 2010, 18:11:42 UTC

Fantastic ending. Angsty! This series has completely ruined me btw and I really would love to hear that there's a sequel - an OLDER sequel where they meet up again. Thanks for the pervy ride ;)

theatrekid510 August 10 2010, 18:38:19 UTC

this story made my summer! and of course who doesn't love grease!!

i could see a potential epilogue some 20 years in the future?? perhaps a short one? hmmm?

you are fantastic at what you do and have an innate ability to draw out emotion from any situation. kudos!

scoutnabout August 10 2010, 18:56:48 UTC

I-YI-YIII!!!!!!!!!(Battle cry of finished story marathon)

I think the end of summer lovin' was very appropriate to the characters' personalities.
Congratulations on Grad school; I'd ask where and what you're studying, but that's probably crossing some unspoken avatar line so I'll just say that I'm sure it'll go great! If you can manage to write all these stories to post and whatever else you probably do for hobbies/leisure and meanwhile to graduate college, then you've got it in the bag for Grad school.
Take care :D

anonymous August 10 2010, 20:23:13 UTC

so great. thank you for a great summer adventure! the conclusion is perfect. it was all emotion & it wasn't purely about the physical anymore...

i loved emma's letter to emily at the end & how she managed to be the first one to write her. i love how she gives away everything and nothing of her feelings in the letter.

congrats on grad school!