City on the River

[nike_ravus]

Title: City on the River 15/?
Author: Alsike
Fandom: Criminal Minds/X-Men
Pairing: Emily Prentiss... eventually Emma Frost
Rating: PG-15
Summary: When one person travels into an alternate universe a thousand others are created. What if Didi showed up without a time slip on Emily's doorstep, in a world without mutants? What would a twenty-five

Comments

[artithena]

Yay! Another awesome update, I love this story :) JJ/Emily used to be my OTP in the 'Criminal Minds' universe, but I have to say that after getting fed up with all the fanfics dealing with Emily/JJ & the Captain Crawfish baby-drama, reading your Emma/Emily stories was a much welcomed breath of fresh air. Your writing has firmly convinced me that Emma is a much better match for Emily on so many levels and has ruined me for Emily/JJ stories ;)

I loved the different perspectives in this section, particularly Emma's POV and I also liked how although Emily is still pretty dense in common-sense related matters, she's finally opening up a bit to Emma and communicating that Emma's important to her. I look forward to seeing how you move their relationship further.

I also loved this line (hehehe):
"Bring your spawn, Prentiss! No more surprises like in December!"

Good luck with your paper!

[pop_the_tart]

Ha! I feel like I should tell you to get back to your paper, but this made my day! :D

I think I finally figured out where I want chapter two of my story to go. We'll see if I can get that cobbled together this week...

[scoutnabout]

Ha, I wouldn't mind dating somebody for weeks without realizing it (except they can't be that exciting if I'm that unaware of them). I like that you brought in a little outside O.C. excitement to stir things up a bit; it's nice when Emma is forced to occasionally show a reaction.

You procrastinate by creating something and I procrastinate by reading your creation: I think you're the more productive of the two. I hope you still write after you graduate? (Since the muse of 'paper' avoidance won't be there anymore.)

Thanks for updating

[morthel]

Awesome update! This is easily my favorite fanfic out there. I hope there are lots of horrible papers in the future, so that you feel the need to continue this story. ;)

[ryoshu]

lol. only Emily would be that dense. good character chapter. thanks for the update and good luck with the paper.