Chelsea Hotel No. 2

[nike_ravus]

Title: Chelsea Hotel No. 2

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss, anti Emily/JJ, JJ/unidentified MC

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 3563

Prompt: 046. Lap Dance and 037. Grinding

Apologies: Actual lap dance in this one! Still uncomfortable with this. I'm having one of those I hate

Comments

[scoutnabout]

I like the direction that you went with this. (Sorry that you haven't been feeling well, I hope that you're okay and feeling better)
Just a few parts I found myself unsure of who's 'voice' I was 'hearing' until I reached the end of the paragraph. In this quote,

“'I should go', she said, starting to rise off the bed.

Emily stopped her, then climbed easily into her lap and pinned her to the bed."

I thought that you might have meant Emma, but I could be wrong?

Thanks for writing as always! :D

[nike_ravus]

Oops! Good catch, thanks!

This one did muddle around a bit. I think I have two many AUs, and the differences between the various versions of the characters are blurring. But hey, any excuse to nerd out.

Thanks for commenting!

[atrumnoxnoctis]

I've been having one of those awful weeks myself, so I know how you feel. I spent three weeks typing up an eight thousand word profile on a character I made for this new RP board, and I still think it's nothing but fourteen pages of pure crap! ~_~ Still, I hope you feel better soon.

I love this second and final installment to the series. And here I thought those happy endings were always going to be out of your grasp! That last scene was great! *snickers* I'm guessing that JJ won't be making an appearance as the PR person for the BAU anytime soon then? XD Take that, you cheating bitch! I heart the scene where Emily kicked her out! <3

Speaking of, I was bit confused when I read one part of that scene. In 'Emily watched her for a long while. The horror faded and was replaced by anger. “You’re- you’re not allowed to-”', I thought it was Emily speaking until I saw the following line: '“Oh don’t you dare tell me what I’m allowed to do. Yes, I’m seeing someone else, and it isn’t any of your business.”' I knew it was Emily speaking then

[rebelbyrdie]

I can't figure out what the best part is: Emma using Freud on Emily, the two of them arguing about movies and literature or the fight between JJ and Emily.

This is a spectacular piece of writing that I really enjoyed.

The only problem is that I can't read Emily/JJ anymore! You've ruined me for it! I actually got annoyed at on-screen JJ last week and made a rude comment and compared her to Emma.

This pairing and your mastery of it has invaded my psyche and I wouldn't have it any other way.

[xenasgab]

I couldn't do anything but laugh!

[theatrekid510]

oh! that ending that leaves so much to the imagination - do they get back to hooking up and seeing each other or is it a one time passing and now they know where the other is and i know im rambling but this update to your many emma/emily tales has made my night!