Chelsea Hotel No. 2

[nike_ravus]

Title: Chelsea Hotel No. 2

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss, anti Emily/JJ, JJ/unidentified MC

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 3563

Prompt: 046. Lap Dance and 037. Grinding

Apologies: Actual lap dance in this one! Still uncomfortable with this. I'm having one of those I hate

Comments

[atrumnoxnoctis]

I've been having one of those awful weeks myself, so I know how you feel. I spent three weeks typing up an eight thousand word profile on a character I made for this new RP board, and I still think it's nothing but fourteen pages of pure crap! ~_~ Still, I hope you feel better soon.

I love this second and final installment to the series. And here I thought those happy endings were always going to be out of your grasp! That last scene was great! *snickers* I'm guessing that JJ won't be making an appearance as the PR person for the BAU anytime soon then? XD Take that, you cheating bitch! I heart the scene where Emily kicked her out! <3

Speaking of, I was bit confused when I read one part of that scene. In 'Emily watched her for a long while. The horror faded and was replaced by anger. “You’re- you’re not allowed to-”', I thought it was Emily speaking until I saw the following line: '“Oh don’t you dare tell me what I’m allowed to do. Yes, I’m seeing someone else, and it isn’t any of your business.”' I knew it was Emily speaking then and that it was JJ that spoke prior. It threw me off for a few seconds, but maybe it's just me being an absent-minded idiot again? ^^;

Great way to end it! I can't wait to see what you're gonna come up with next!