Hilarious ending! Very funny getting the p.o.v. from JJ and her barely noticeable presence. Hot hot hot. Having Emily marked and pierced and completely single-minded was great. Thanks again!
Lol! Alright, I really have to admit it: I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, threesomes, foursomes, and all!
My god, you're amazing woman! <3 You even had me liking Sebastian in this, and I'm not even going to tell you hard a feat that was to accomplish, but you completely blew me away! To be honest, I'm not used to seeing Sebastian in most fics I read. I'm a bit biased since I subconsciously think of Princess Alexandria's rendition of him in her 'Hellfire' segment when I hear Sebastian Shaw. There, he was malevolent and cruel, but here, you have him as playful and lust-driven which was a refreshing change, and it definitely made liking him a bit easier
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This was definitely 'happy, fun time Sebastian,' he's not even like this in my other stories, but he *could have* been. I remember when i was rereading 500 miles the last time and at the very end, Christy asks Tessa what the Hellfire Club was like here, and she's rather shocked by the prospect of it being so bad (if Tessa can be shocked by anything). That was really the far end of the spectrum. Canon is somewhere in the middle: lots of violence but usually consensual sex. And then there's this. Of course, i was considering having Sebastian's excuse for being in the area was that he needed to pick up a shipment of girls, to whom he was offering *new life in america!* If anyone can make sex-slave trafficking fun and cheery, it would be this Sebastian
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OH. WOW. I really enjoyed that yet I do not know anything about X-Men, I'm a Em/JJ shipper but Emily having sex with any girl does it for me and the sex scenes were HAWT! I'm off to have a cold shower now, thanks!
Extensive knowledge of X-Men is not really necessary for any of my smut fics. It just means you won't complain that Sebastian is really OOC in this. :) My thought process is usually, Emily is hot, Emma is a bitchy, boot-wearing, dominatrixy semi-villain. Thus they must have sex.
utterly, utterly, hot! JJ doesn't know what 'hit her' until she was flat on her back! most of us wish for such a pleasant rude awakening to something...lol
although i suspect that Emma doesn't know what 'hit her' either...
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My god, you're amazing woman! <3 You even had me liking Sebastian in this, and I'm not even going to tell you hard a feat that was to accomplish, but you completely blew me away! To be honest, I'm not used to seeing Sebastian in most fics I read. I'm a bit biased since I subconsciously think of Princess Alexandria's rendition of him in her 'Hellfire' segment when I hear Sebastian Shaw. There, he was malevolent and cruel, but here, you have him as playful and lust-driven which was a refreshing change, and it definitely made liking him a bit easier ( ... )
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Extensive knowledge of X-Men is not really necessary for any of my smut fics. It just means you won't complain that Sebastian is really OOC in this. :)
My thought process is usually, Emily is hot, Emma is a bitchy, boot-wearing, dominatrixy semi-villain. Thus they must have sex.
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although i suspect that Emma doesn't know what 'hit her' either...
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