"Always"- Ficlet
So. I wrote this for the girlz_kissing back a few months ago and posted it there :) Got some comments on it, pretty happy about them too :) I realized I never posted it on my journals though, so now I do :)
Title: Always
Author: nichicreative a.k.a. chono88
Beta: Awesome doppelganger44
Word Count: 160
Dedicated to: Dops. You’re amazing, your betaing has made it stunning. You know, I lack especially grammar(hello tenses xD) I’m so glad you did me this wonderful favour and got the time to beta it. Thank you so very very much. I corrected your suggestions with one exception, because of the effect I wanted to have^^
You don’t remember anymore when it first happened, that you laugh at her every joke and smile at her in a warm loving way. You never would have expected. It just hits you too easily. But whenever it started, it surely happened fast.
It’s been a while since you knew that girls attracted you; but everything is so complicated. So wrong. So right. So undefined. At a point, when everyone around you slowly vanished, because they thought you imagined having sex with them; it’s only the one girl, who never thought the way the others did, that you love.
Is it funny, that you always fall in love hopelessly? Is it sad? For you, it is scary. Because in that very moment when you feel her touch and listen to her laugh, you feel your feelings burn in your heart and your heart beating fast in your chest.
It’s un-returned love, but you’ll always love her. Always have. Always will.
Title: Always
Author: nichicreative a.k.a. chono88
Beta: Awesome doppelganger44
Word Count: 160
Dedicated to: Dops. You’re amazing, your betaing has made it stunning. You know, I lack especially grammar(hello tenses xD) I’m so glad you did me this wonderful favour and got the time to beta it. Thank you so very very much. I corrected your suggestions with one exception, because of the effect I wanted to have^^
You don’t remember anymore when it first happened, that you laugh at her every joke and smile at her in a warm loving way. You never would have expected. It just hits you too easily. But whenever it started, it surely happened fast.
It’s been a while since you knew that girls attracted you; but everything is so complicated. So wrong. So right. So undefined. At a point, when everyone around you slowly vanished, because they thought you imagined having sex with them; it’s only the one girl, who never thought the way the others did, that you love.
Is it funny, that you always fall in love hopelessly? Is it sad? For you, it is scary. Because in that very moment when you feel her touch and listen to her laugh, you feel your feelings burn in your heart and your heart beating fast in your chest.
It’s un-returned love, but you’ll always love her. Always have. Always will.