Beyond Regrets

[niayesungie]

Title:  Beyond Regrets
Characters:  Yesung, Siwon, Hangeng, Heechul, OC
Pairings:  Yewon, Siwon/OC, brief!Hanchul
Genre: Angst, implied!smut
Rating: NC-17
Summary:  Regrets always awfully hurt.
Disclaimer:  I only own the story and the plot.  The characters in the fic don't resembling the real characters in their real life.

Comments

[neyaays]

Wohooo,,, this is really sad. Am I miss something??? siwon's actions toward yesung changes drastically it confuse me :(
*please forgive my slow brain*

I miss YeWon,,,not so many YeWon fics these days :(

[niayesungie]

Siwon only used Yesung for sex back in Cheonan, while Yesung actually was craving for his affection. but after they debuted, his feelings towards Yesung somehow developed, with Yesung's constant cold treatment to him and rejection of his 'make love' offer. and after Hangeng left, he just realize how important Yesung is to him so he tended to cling to the man more than ever, but it was too late since Yesung had closed his heart to him already so he couldn't take Siwon seriously... i hope this helps? it's ok, sometimes my mind missed some details dear, please forgive me >,

[jacklyntsang]

My perception on this story is different from most/all of readers here and even the writer (uh, is it possible ...lol?) But first of all, this is one of the most beautiful fics I have read so far so that I have to give out comment ...he...he

[niayesungie]

i'm so happy to find you, giving your heart to the comment!^^ and you even quoted me *__* this is my first time someone quoted my fic *A

[jacklyntsang]

I don't know what is "Siwon is being bad/jackass nowadays/recently and need to be tortured" all about??? While I'm curious but skeptical b/c it's Siwon - the nicest gentleman you guys are talking about, right? And I don't see why that outside stuffs have anything to do with this story. But put that aside. Rest assure that my perception is purely based on the story and nothing else. When I read a piece of writing, I pay attention to the characters and how they are developed through out the plot, how it flows. Is it fresh/new? I don't care who's bad, who's good or who ends up with whom as long as it fits the story. Then see if there is/are surprised factor(s); any tight-knots/peaks/climaxes in the story and how those knots are un-tighten; any loopholes in there. Any lessons of life we can get out of it. The last things are the structure, grammar and spelling but those are not that important, the plot and characters are. Your story is beautiful because you got most of the things I look for are there

[niayesungie]

it's funny that i failed in communicating my imagination through my fic, yet it become much more dramatic than the original intention... it's because i was crying while typing the most part of this and somehow my brain wrecked that way :p i indeed don't wanna change it, since i almost gave up with this fic in December (this one abandoned for like 2 weeks before i finish the last sub-chapter) and i like it this way (what writer am i liking my own writing -___-). let Siwon's actual feelings for Yesung in Cheonan become the reader's opinion... i feel like it's wrong to "defend" siwon's love for Yesung in the fic and "pushing" my own intention to the reader haha

[jacklyntsang]

Reading your replies, I realize how far off this story to your original intention. And I swear, you are the cutest confused fic writer ... EVER ... so far ... haha ... All elements you used for this story are necessary, nothing is over the top or unacceptable

[niayesungie]

yesung was unconscious until he came (i imagined he woken up because of his orgasm), because i think it's impossible if a person could pretend himself to sleep all the time while being seduced physically (and mostly in the genital part). all the reaction he gave: "Yesung's back was arched while the eyes still shut, and Siwon got really amazed by that. The silent moans and incoherent voices Yesung made was so beautiful, Siwon loved it to death." in my imagination is a rational reaction of an active (alive) body while being pleasured though the mind is inactive

[jacklyntsang]

Yesung physically might not be fully recovered yet but mentally somewhat awaken. Your original thought doesn't work here for reasons as I said already. Honey, you don't need to convince me anything. Remember what I said? My perception is purely based on reading your story and nothing eles. Moreover, I don't have any knowlegde about your intention from the start, just follow every details of the storyline only, no bias at all. Your story is just beautiful as it is, no loophole. That's why I said you need to forget about your initial idea/thought, erase them all and reread your story to fully appreciate and enjoy your own work. It's BEAUTIFUL, ok!

PS. You don't see Yewon fic I'm asking... So, it means no one has yet writen it. Too bad.