fic for changetje

Aug 27, 2010 23:36

Gift fic for: changetje
From: vinyaromeniel

Title: The Gentlest Temptation
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: ShigePi
Summary: Shige works at an okonomiyaki place. One of the regulars is the best friend of the boss. And while Shige has a not so secret crush on this regular ever since the beginning, nothing ever happened. That is, until his boss decides to play cupid. But is clumsy ( Read more... )

r: nc17, p: shige/yamapi, c: yamapi, c: shige

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changetje August 28 2010, 19:22:10 UTC
SAKLDKAS;DKSA;N I AM BACK. WITH A COMMENT FULL OF FLAIL :DDD

OMG, you have no idea how happy I am that you wrote me SHIGEPI of all pairings *______* AND IT'S AU, aksl;dklsa;'dsa. And Shige works at a okonomiyaki place. AND YAMAPI IS THE SALARYMAN. Do I know you, Anon-san? I have a HUGE thing for business man!Yamapi *_*

OKAY, I'll start at the beginning, or else this entire comment would just be capslock and keysmash XD;

Aww, Shige is so full of fail already ♥

The owner- a tiny guy not much older than him

AHAHAHA, I JUST KNEW IT WAS RYO BEFORE YOU EVEN WROTE HIS NAME. :D

and a lot of customers come regularly just to see him fail

Shige's life is so hard XD;

Ahaha and Massu is the chief! I REALLY like that you put in Massu, for some reason. OMFG, love this fic already.

When the clock hits seven, the door will open and Nishikido’s face will turn into a huge smile:

“Hey Pi, long time no see.”

And the guy called Pi, all dressed up neatly in his suit, will laugh and answer:

“I came here just last week and we even met on Saturday night.”

IEEEEEEEH PIIIIIIIIIII ♥

Awww and Shige gets all flustered over Pi, trying not to throw water over his suit XD So cute ♥

Shige will blush anyway and trip over nothing, sending Nishikido and the other customers into hysterical laughter.

Shige's life is REALLY hard XD

“Pi is very oblivious to the world. You have to tell him straight into his face or else he won’t get it."

kasl;dkasl;fkas; SO TRUE. This sounds so much like Yamapi, he's so oblivious XD

Shige was still a bit scared of Nishikido

EVERYONE would be scared of Ryo xD

Shige had looked up, thinking it was just another normal customer but his still shy “Irashaimase” got stuck in his throat when their eyes met and Shige fell hard and deep.

JDLKASJDKLSAJDK;LSA; *_______*

From Yamashita’s reaction, a smirk, Shige guessed Yamashita was sort of used to this kind of reaction when seeing him for the first time.

Ahaha, he's used to people crushing all over him xD Why do I find this so amusing.

and Shige had to concentrate very hard to not get distracted by the way Yamashita slowly loosened his tie.

LOOSENING HIS TIE. *________* OMG KDL;SAKD;LSAKD;A HOT

“Ryo-chan can be very scary, ne? But you don’t have to worry, he’s actually very nice.” Yamashita grinned and looked over to where Nishikido glared at him.

Ahahahaha ♥

AND THEN JIN MAKES AN APPEARANCE ♥ Well, not in person, but still, he's mentioned! OMG, I love you, Anon-san *___*

Shige caught Yamapi’s eyes by accident and while the student got beat red, the business man just gave him a sympathetic smile.

Shige thinks that this might have been the moment he fell in love.

Awwww ♥

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changetje August 28 2010, 19:22:59 UTC
Nishikido gives him a look and rolls his eyes again.

“Hachiko, 8pm. It’s an order. See it as a business dinner."

Lol, this is so like Ryo XD Just giving orders without telling why xD

Aww and Shige is all nervous, because he gets to eat dinner with Yamapi, how cute <3

Yamashita catches his eyes, smiles and waves and Shige feels even hotter. Yamashita is still wearing his business suit. The sleeves of his white button-down shirt rolled up to his elbows, the first button open and when Shige draws closer he can see just that tiny little glimpse of chest.

REALLY, DO YOU KNOW ME OR STH? I LOVE THAT IMAGE *_____* UNF

“I didn’t even know he came back from LA today.” Yamashita says not being in the slightest irritated.

“That’s because you never listen when people talk. Anyway, if he didn’t bring me any nice souvenirs, I’m going to kick his ass right back to LA.”

Ahaha, Pi never listens ♥ And Ryo needs to pick up Jin from the airport xD WHAT A TIMING, JIN. (or maybe Ryo just planned this all xD)

“I think it’s good that Ryo-chan finally found someone to organize his stuff a bit. He’s a really good friend and great at bossing people around, but he sucks at handling money.” Yamashita grins, clinking their glasses and Shige grins back.

Idk why I find this so funny xD

“Because Jin burnt the okonomiyaki, was too flirty with the female guests and would rather sit there talking than serving the drinks.”

LOL, JIN WOULD SO DO THAT XD

“Oh my God that feels so nostalgic. I haven’t been at a playground in so long.” Yamashita sighs as he lets himself fall down on the swing.

SWINNNNNNNGS *______* OMG, I love scenes in the playground for some reason, idk why. Yamapi swinging like a kid is such a cute image <3

“I hope my couch is okay for you.” Yamashita continues, head now resting against the chain of the swing, a small smile playing around his lips.

ksaldksal;dksa;dksa;l SO CUTE

And suddenly Yamashita is near, God so near. He holds Shige’s swing by the chain just in case Shige decided to flee. He watches Shige, eyes him as if to remember every part of him.

He smiles at him, pulls the swing closer and Shige falls forward, right into Yamashita’s face. Yamashita grins triumphantly right before their lips touch.

YES, KISS *____* I love the detail of Yamapi clutching the chain of Shige's swing <3

“Yamashita..” Shige starts but Yamashita interrupts him.

“Tomo. I want you to call me Tomo.”

TOMO *_________*

And then Shige confesses, FINALLY. AND YAMAPI TAKES HIM HOME, kasldkasl;dksa. I KNOW WHERE THIS IS GOING 8D

allows him to fall as deep as he never fell before

Oh, wow that's so pretty.

kdlsakd;sakd;sa AND THEN THE ENTIRE KISSING SCENE ON THE COUCH. I LOVE THAT YOU PRACTICALLY DESCRIBED YAMAPI'S ENTIRE BODY ♥ *____* I remember putting something like that in my request form... XD

AND THEN THE SEX *________* OMFG, I don't think I've ever read Yamapi/Shige porn before and sakdsakdl;sakd this was perfect and so romantic akdals;dlas';dls' ♥♥♥

Nishikido looks mildly disgusted from Yamashita to Shige and back again.

AHAHA, MILDY DISGUSTED ♥

Sometimes though, Yamashita does not come and Nishikido tells Shige “He’s on a business trip.”

And Shige laughs and says “I know. He’ll be back Friday night.”

Nishikido tries to glare at him but his eyes are shining with the knowledge of a job well done.

THANK YOU, RYO, FOR PLAYING CUPID ♥♥♥ :D

ksadkl;asdk;dklas; I LOVED THIS FIC SO INCREDIBLY MUCH *________* IT'S SO LOVELY AND FUNNY AND ROMANTIC AND IT HAS YAMAPI AND SHIGE (AND I TOTALLY LOVED THAT YOU PUT IN RYO, JIN AND MASSU *___*) I don't know how to thank you Anon-san, for writing such great fic for me. But - THANKS SO MUCH *________* If you're not already on my flist, then you certainly need to be there *___* *showers you with love and sparklies* ♥♥♥♥

jdksladl;sa THANKS ♥♥♥♥

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vinyaromeniel September 16 2010, 10:10:41 UTC
Do I know you, Anon-san? I have a HUGE thing for business man!Yamapi *_*

Truth to be told.. we don't really know each other. But really.. we all know that Pi+Suit=Hot so yeah xD

REALLY, DO YOU KNOW ME OR STH? I LOVE THAT IMAGE *_____* UNF

then again who doesn't? xD And I get inspiration at every corner here in Japan haha You can't help but grow a suit fetish here, honestly haha

(or maybe Ryo just planned this all xD)
dumdidum. Of course Ryo would NEVER plan this all beforehand xDDDDDD

I remember putting something like that in my request form... XD
Yep you did and because I am very fond of MuPi (=Muscle Pi) I couldn't help but describe the awesomeness that is was his body before Ashita no Joe happened (now it's just sad '-.- but that's another topic)

I'm really happy you liked this fic, honestly. I was trying to stick to your requests and always felt like it's not enough but I'm happy you liked it so much :D

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