It gets Worse [1/1]

[neverxnever]

Title: It gets Worse
Author: neverxnever
Rating: light Pg-13?
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon, Ryan/Keltie
POV: Third
Summary: Ryan laughs and brushes Brendon’s lengthening hair out of his eyes. “Do that again, maybe?” Ryan asks sheepishly, and the last thing on Brendon’s mind is Keltie, so he does. He kisses Ryan again, like he’s trying to get a point across. I should

Comments

[nerdxvomit]

awe in ways i feel bad for all of them and I did really like this. mostly how Keltie isnt made as a bitch and how Brendon doenst hate her and how it seems more realistic.
good job! =]

[neverxnever]

Thank you. I was trying to go for realistic. It was surprisingly hard, since I don't like Keltie all that much :/

Glad you liked it :] ♥

[nerdxvomit]

welcome
I dont really have an opinion on her due to I dont know much about her
but if she makes Ryro happy then it's all good I guess
but I will be pissed if she ever breaks his heart.

<33

[aylaranzz]

Poor boys! I hate when they don't get together in the end. How could Ryan not break up with Keltie for Brendon. That's so sad. :( Loved your style of writing. Good job. Poor Brendon.

[neverxnever]

Tyvm! ♥

[junjou_robotica]

I liked it ^_^
It was a little different, seeing as he chose Keltie and all.

[neverxnever]

I'm glad you did :]
I felt like it wouldn't have been as realistic if Brendon and Ryan had gotten their happy ending...

[stayxwithxme394]

I don't like it. Well, okay, I love it, but I don't like it. :( Friggin Keltie.

[neverxnever]

Lmao. You had me worried there for a second :o
Ty for loving this and commenting to tell me so ♥

[stayxwithxme394]

Heh. Sorry :S YOU'RE WELCOME.

[draw_me_silly]

-pulls Brendon into hug-
This is so sad! Poor guys... -grabs Ryan too-
Ugh, I wish they could all just get what they want
I love this <33

[neverxnever]

Me too, bb. Me too :[
Tyvm! ♥