Chapter 3 is up and ready for reading. The story is starting to get more interesting as this chapter actually has action in it. I also worked out a offical timeline of events for referencing, that will be uploaded after the story is complete.
Also, I was a little concerned that I was perhaps taking things a little too far, well after I watched
this episode I realized I am not taking it that far beyond what the show already did. This pleases me, and to a lesser extent shocks me that they put out such episodes that pushed and or broke the censor rating in the 90s for a children's TV show.
Edit: I also decided to lower the rating to Teen seeing as though the story has some dark and serious elements to it, I don't think it is really really M rated. Esspecially after watching this episode, I don't think I'll be pressing a limit anytime soon.