[series] It's the End of the World as We Know It (And I Feel Fine) [7/7]

[nekowrites]

Title: It's the End of the World as We Know It (And I Feel Fine)
Pairings: Mark/Youngjae, Jackson/JB
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~9k
Summary: After the outbreak, Youngjae was sure that he lost everything, his friends, his family, his former life. He was right, but he was also wrong. He's suffered loss yes, but he also ends up gaining as well.
A/N: Well,

Comments

[anonymous]

Gosh to be honest I let out a huge sigh of relief after reading the ending. I think you worked the atmosphere for this whole fic really well! As this is a zombie AU fic, I feel that you did a really great job keeping up with that sense of lurking danger around the corner for the characters, like for example when the group went into the safehouse; I literally felt concerned that the fic would end with multiple deaths and a lot of angst. I really liked how you managed to maintain the tension and add on to it throughout the fic!

I'm sorry if I'm being repetitive but I have to say that you're characterisation has been well-explored! The thing I really love about your writing is that you're very sensitive and consistent with the way you portray their personalities with their actions and speech, I feel that this really breathes life into the characters. (By the way of you're wondering I'm the same anon who complimented you on your characterisation before on one of your jackbum fics hahaha)

Also you're really creative with your plot, I can almost never guess what's going to happen next while I reading your fics. And it flows so well and clicks into place so nicely, I really hope that my writing will be as good as your's someday!

[nekokonneko]

Ah I remember you, nonny! :D It's not repetitive at all. It's good to hear that my characterisation is still on point. Maybe it's because I read over the words so much while I'm writing/editing that sometimes I don't even know if they're getting across the meaning I want to people seeing for the first time who aren't inside my head and don't know what my intentions are.

I'm also glad to hear you liked how I did the plot since this is the first time I've done this kind of story. I tried to keep that balance of surprising the audience, but making the twists make sense and subtly alluding to them before they happened. Also to keep up the tension and make the reader concerned for the characters even when I know that things are going to work out and no-one is actually going to die by the end.

I'm really flattered that you think tso highly of my writing <333