Wahoo, I am on a roll baby!

[bingelybeep]

And I've got even more fic. This is the second part of a 3 part series. The first part can be found on here somewhere if you need to refresh your memory. I'm going to apologise for this now as I was trying to get the same feeling as in the first part and I think I just ended up being melodramatic. This may be in line for a massive overhaul the next

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[danceallday]

You, on a roll? Indeed.

This is... beautifulchillingbittersweethauntingperfection. And clearly, it has left me unable to speak clear English.

Honestly, this is absolutely amazing. I don't see this as melodramatic at all, the emotions seem true and raw to me.

Alright, so I'm babbling now... basically, I'm just trying to say that this was truly fabulous and I absolutely cannot wait until the next part. Great job!

[shadow_diva]

Oh man. Speechless, me. Melodramatic? No freakin' way, dear heart. I think you nailed it, just as you nailed the first chapter. Like danceallday said, the emotions were raw and true and I totally felt this. Heartbreaking and beautiful, and I bow. Totally don't know how you do it, but however you do, keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

[theirishgirl]

Beautifully raw. Don't change a thing ;)

[uranaikko]

hope there's a third part, i dun feel very happy with this one.. *not that i don't like it, i love it... (eventough somepart i dun yeah.. you know it)* make them admit their feeling, cause if they do admit in this chap, well, i'm the one who's silly that dun understand.. hehehe next chappie if you want to continue it.. ^.^

[emony2]

That's a total roll you've got going there.

That was so moving, I went back and read the first part and then this one straight after. All the emotions you've got in there are so true and so perfect.

Very much looking forward to the third installment. :)