a hug and a kiss by iniq

[iniq]

title: a hug and a kiss
pairing: gibbs/dinozzo
rating: pg
warnings: unbeta'd, gibbs pov
spoilers: none
for the "music" challenge

Comments

[iniq]

♥
You calling it 'sweet' makes me happy - because I've been working on a series of dangerously mushy ficlets for those two and that shows that the mush/sweetness works and comes across. *g*

[karendreamer]

This is so lovely and so angsty. Very well written and the emotions very clearly expressed.

[iniq]

Thanks for the comment - it helps a lot, knowing that what I'm trying to describe comes across as what it's supposed to be.

[adafrog]

Great story. Feel so bad for Tony and Gibbs. Adore the little piece of domesticity you showed us.
I loved your interpretation of the challenge. And as for English not being your first language-kudos!

[iniq]

♥ I'm a huge fan of random domestic scenes - scenes taken out of their life together that don't involve sex or a case or a fight. >.O
Am very happy you liked it!

[burningchaos]

I adore this and only soptted one tiny thing. "Time to fake the music, yes?" Fake should be face.

[iniq]

Yes, it should be! But it's Ziva. X3 She would say fake instead of face. I think...

"Time to fake the music, yes?" and Tony would take a moment to correct her before shooting him one of those smiles;

Glad you liked the fic! ♥

[burningchaos]

Totally my bad. *head to desk* Sorry...it is why I never, ever beta...I suck.

[iniq]

Aw, but it wasn't so obvious - just three words. Come to think of it, I should've probably made it more obvious... X3 So, I'm glad you mentioned it. ♥