Comments | nate_jenny: Getting there (2/2)

rosa_lie in nate_jenny

Getting there (2/2)

Oct 31, 2008 10:27

Hello! Here's the second part of my fic. You can find the first one here. I hope you'll enjoy reading the text as much as I enjoyed writing it. And remember that comments are love, so tell me what you think! :)
I'd also like to thank my lovely beta, gglover16. Darling, you rock! :)

Title: Getting there (part 2 of 2)
Pairing: Nate/Jenny
Rating: PG-13
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Comments 10

jellibeen23 October 31 2008, 12:15:11 UTC

Such an amazing ending! Love the fact that he was the one to make the first move.

rosa_lie November 1 2008, 13:35:45 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked it! :)

burstoflight November 1 2008, 21:11:44 UTC

Wow! That was awesome!!!

You need to write more fic...like a fic about the aftermath of the 208 kiss. *nods*

rosa_lie November 1 2008, 22:44:22 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story!

And, well, since I'm going to write some more Nate/Jenny, I might as well write about aftermath of the kiss from 2x08. :D It won't hurt, right? ;)

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Re: loved it! rosa_lie November 2 2008, 10:39:15 UTC

Thank you! I'm so excited that you liked the story! And I'm so glad that you think that I managed to capture Nate's character. :)

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Re: loved it! rosa_lie November 2 2008, 14:57:08 UTC

Whoa, thanks! I didn't expect that much. ;)

walkthehalls November 2 2008, 16:01:39 UTC

you have to write more!!! you're so awesome, really! (i sound like really weird and i'm so sorry) and this is so sweet<3

rosa_lie November 2 2008, 16:34:08 UTC

Don't worry, you just sound enthusiastic, and enthusiastic is good. :D I'm really happy that you liked it! :) And I'll certainly write more.

isisizabel November 6 2008, 17:50:57 UTC

Awww, sweetie, that was AMAZING. I demand that you write more N/J fics. And I really enjoyed the way you kept everything in present tense. That's a really nifty idea.

I think your reaction to Jenny's dream coming true was dead-on. Of course it would be terrifying, but stunning.

Wonderful job.

rosa_lie November 6 2008, 18:49:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm just over the moon right now. :)

In fact, I'm going to start new N/J fic today, concerning that week after the first kiss, when Nate and Jenny didn't talk to each other. (And it'll probably go slightly AU near the end, but that's just me loving AU passionately. I can't help it. I don't even try to fight it. ;))

As for the tense - I just love writing in such a way. It gives the text great dynamic and leaves the reader with the impression that the events actually take place here and now, something that is in my opinion almost impossible to achieve when you use the past tense.

Jenny's reaction to her dream coming true was in fact... my reaction. I was once so happy and terrified at the same time, and I could hardly believe that it was even possible! Unfortunately, it wasn't about a boy. ;)

Thank you once again for the comment.