So I wrote something weird.

[rixana]

This is my first post here, I think. Just throwing that out there. Anyway, I have this bad habit of opening Word and typing whatever pops into my head; no planning whatsoever. I did that earlier today, and what became of it was a bit... well, special, for lack of a better word. Figured I'd share.

Julian had to make a choice. She put so much pressure

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[dobbin477]

I thought it was a good piece, and opening up Word and just writing what comes to mind is a good way to write. You might want to try NaNoWriMo in November where you write 50,000 words in 30 days :).

The one problem I had was when Jordan was out in the street and a car came by. I wasn't sure if he got run over:

"There was a squealing of brakes, and then a crash. Moments later the air was filled with shocked screaming. Jordan just stood there in disbelief. Alexandrea took his hand and lead him away from the bloody scene. He moved like a zombie. Like dead weight.
'You knew,' he stated in a empty, ghostlike voice as he sat heavily on the motel bed and stared at the tattered carpet. She hovered near the door, unsure of what he might do."