Original Fiction/Prose Poem: Moments

[evr_afire]

Okay, so this is just a little thing I wrote yesterday (it's really short, but it took me a while to write ^^), and I'm posting it here because I'd really like an honest opinion on it...  So please tell me what you think!  And also, I'd like to know what you guys think the last paragraph is about, like what situations it might apply to.  Thanks in

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[evr_afire]

Thanks anyway:). I think the problem with the last paragraph is that I was thinking a lot of things through in my head and they didn't all get put down. I'll definitely work on it a bit more... Thanks!