Original Fiction/Prose Poem: Moments

[evr_afire]

Okay, so this is just a little thing I wrote yesterday (it's really short, but it took me a while to write ^^), and I'm posting it here because I'd really like an honest opinion on it...  So please tell me what you think!  And also, I'd like to know what you guys think the last paragraph is about, like what situations it might apply to.  Thanks in advance!!

( Moments )