Title: reinforcements
'Verse/characters: Trickwood Unification; Hernén, Belladonna, Donnel
Prompt: 73F "delivery"
Word Count: 1851
Notes: follows
downriver, uphill. Now I just need to figure out where Ruadhan's gotten to. *eyes*
I am apparently currently into long sentences.
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They'd cleared Waycross, finally. )
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How wide are they? *curious*
But Waycross was clear, which meant Ulysse's order of tea could finally go directly down two sets of rivers instead of the awkward portaging route Geoffrey had engineered around Waycross. Belladonna had wandered up with the first of the supply runs to inform him that his crazy mage brother had promptly tripled his order, and wanted to know if he had any of 'that cider, he knows the one' going spare.
bwah. Of course he did.
"Big delivery this time," she told him, but wouldn't explain herself. Just grinned whenever he asked, all long red tongue or pale teeth, depending on her form.
Oh, Belladonna. *snerk* I do love their relationship of mild mutual trolling.
She laughed herself hoarse, had to pad off to the side of the trail to catch her breath, but once she did, she just shook her head at him, grinning ( ... )
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Ulysse points out that he did know what cider was being referred to.
I think Belladonna trolls Hernén so much just because his very view of existence occasionally trolls her. She is not so used to a couple-generations-from-mage mageblood's options.
I suspect Loki-horse is one of Thekla's many-times descendants, if only for the 'so. BORED' problemsolving.
I would love to hear the expanded babble section behind these thoughts.
I think I need slightly more context on what you're asking for?
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I would point out that I was also referencing the tea.
Exactly! They troll each other. It just isn't always intentional from Hernen's end.
Yeah. That...really sounds right.
Hernen knows/knew that Donnel keeps company with wolves. It would be interesting to hear about his perspectives on that, how he'd heard about it, and what his initial reactions were. And now that Hernen is keeping company with wolves himself, how is this changing his perception of his half brother?
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I'm sorry, my brain has been sidetracked and eaten by the concept of having and holding and making armor of monster scales (what shiny dead things from other worlds?)
*thinks* okay, on the re-read, it looks like this is one of those incredible expanding story ones. it feels very dense and over-load-ish in my head.
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>.> I might have 1600 words of a (very) small partial expansion of the beginning of this, yes. It started life as the beginning of this one, and then wouldn't have flowed to where this one ended. Well, not without some large number of thousands of words, anyway.
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Stupid fractal story.
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I'm glad it read reasonably. :)
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:D
It's interesting gradually getting to know people--Usoa and Niall both got mentioned in previous pieces in this set of posts, but not in combination--and starting to get a feel for things. There are So. Many. Names.
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no.
no they don't. he has ALL the brothers. every one of them (and a few sisters too).
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