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This is a college essay that needs a lot of help. Any feedback at all would really really be appreciated. This is based off of my Governor's School essay. My goal is to be done by today. Basically, I know it's missing something. It's missing a paragraph that explains that I don't want to be a creative writer per say, just that writing is a part of ( Read more... )