As the World Turns Fic #5: The One That Marks the Real Start

May 07, 2010 18:43

Title: The One That Marks the Real Start
Author: Myrna1_2_3
Fandom: As the World Turns
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid
Rating: R
Summary: This is where it really, finally starts
Disclaimer: Not-not-mine
Author’s Notes: I’m messing around a little with the details of committees and the Foundation and the hospital wing thing project. As one does.

The One That Marks the Real Start )

atwt; luke/reid

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hannahalexrose May 7 2010, 23:24:19 UTC
*Squeel, flail, squeel again*

There are no words to describe how much i love this.
I am so IN LOVE with this.

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myrna1_2_3 May 8 2010, 12:07:57 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

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astrolatryae May 7 2010, 23:30:51 UTC
OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.
Do you know what I am doing right now? I AM WIPING AWAY TEARS. Yes! Really! Tears! You moved me to tears!
“ Besides, “ Luke continued, “I was stupid to think I could… I mean, really, what was going to happen? He comes home at the end of the day and talks about how, oh yeah, he saved some guy who was having a stroke and some other guy with a brain tumor, and,” Luke motioned at Noah, “And he made some blind guy see, and what, I tell him, well, hey, I filled out form G-75X-L to preserve the Foundation’s tax exempt status! I used ink!” He rolled his eyes at the idea. “I don’t even have a college degree. How long could someone like me keep someone like him interested?”

“I don’t even recognize you,” Noah said.

“Give me a break,” Luke said. “Look at who he’s with now! Simon Ashby is gorgeous, he’s smart, he’s as brilliant at his job as Reid is at his, and I’m…”

“You’re what?” Noah said as if daring Luke to finish the sentence.

Luke snorted. “None of those things,” he said pointedly.
This is what ( ... )

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myrna1_2_3 May 8 2010, 12:09:58 UTC
Your note totally made my day! What lovely feedback. Thank kyou so much--I can't tell you how much I appreciate it! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

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happyinchintz72 May 7 2010, 23:40:39 UTC
Oh my good god that was so cute it hurt!

You write Reid with sooooo much conviction and it's perfect. LOVE him being prtective of Luke - I have always thought he'd be like that in a relationship.

I adore your writing sooooo much!!!!!!! :D :D

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myrna1_2_3 May 8 2010, 12:10:54 UTC
Thank you for the kind words!

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justinlovesart May 7 2010, 23:42:04 UTC
Wonderful. That final "Okay" is perfection.

I assume Noah is the ex-boyfriend? I love how you wrote his relationship with Luke, like friendship but with a special tenderness.

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myrna1_2_3 May 8 2010, 12:11:56 UTC
Yes, Noah is the ex. Thanks so much for reading the story!

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myrna1_2_3 May 8 2010, 12:12:08 UTC
I'm so glad! Thanks for letting me know!

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