Salt and Water chapter 5 ToraxShou

[mxtrxofsomer]

Title: Salt and Water
Chapters: 5/10
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Set and Theme: C #9 - Birthday
Genre: angst, romance, AU
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: R
Warnings: longer than usual, and toraxshou overload for this chap
Summary: “... it was an encounter too short from the view of the heavens, fair enough in the eyes of the humans, infinite from my

Comments

[mxtrxofsomer]

ehhh??? *grabs you* of course not hun~ your comments always makes me happy~ and when i saw how long it was, i was five times happy~ wee~

the truth is, this made me teary-eyed. really. *cuddles* i've been discouraged a lot of times, it always happens but seeing comments, no matter how simple they are cheers me up, slaps me hard and screams at me to continue. so what more if i received this kind of appreciation from you? such happiness and honour. ! it's already enough to make me melt on the spot~ xDDD and sometimes, even go dramatic. (i need to stop that tho) =.=" your comments mean a lot to me~ (teh influence) it's just hard to express by words eh??? but~~ i am soooo reaaalllllllllyyyyyy glad~~!

wah~ you like the last scene~ it's my fave too~ i was relieved to know that cutting the smut part did not affect it. *me thinks that it's not that appropriate*

aww... dun cry naw... okey??? no crying... tora doesn't want shou crying and me doesn't want my wife crying too eh~ *wipes tears away* *huggles*

i wuv you too~ nyaa~~~ \^3^/ chuu~<3 chuu~<3 chuu~<3 ~~~ xD

thanks so much ne~ i'll do my best~ ^^ good luck and lots of shou luff are effective~ ^^b

[a_ashi]

aaa this comment should've been posted earlier but lj crushed for a while >.<

well your story makes me 981430764 happy <3 *nods nods*

I actually read the last part with tear in my eyes. It was just so simple but beautiful.and you don't have to be discouraged *shakes head* you never fail to amaze me and the others *nods*.I'll support 'till the end,haha you wake up the cheesy part of me <3.and Ugh I wish I could write what I really think but is just hard to express it in words x33.I'm so happy!! you made my week <3,my month *giggles*

and I'm so glad you think the smut is inappropriate cause I think the same way but I didn't know how to put it.The story doesn't need smut to show their strong bond.You always gave hints and Tora's actions in this chapter would make anyone go over the edge (not in the pervy way x3).As I said the simplicity,but in the same way the complexity of the story is beautiful.I, myself am a HUGE fan of smut but this fic just doesn't need it ^_^

awieeee *glomps screen* x33.sowwie but I have to glomp something,my sweet wifey <3.

chuu backu,I'm such a fan of chuus *giggles*

sure,cause shou is such an angel <3,he'll definitely be effective.He helped me today,after I finished my test I was thinking of alice nine -_-".I'm such an alice nine freak x33.

[mxtrxofsomer]

*gets jealous with the screen* *pouts*
>.>
,
*GLOMPS* and *bites you* lmao..

eh, you had exams too. did they go well? i really hope they did! exams... they ruin life. xDDD but if you had shou as an inspiration, hmm... i thik it's okaay~!

*blushes* thanks for the encouragement... and those beautiful words... *is getting shy naw* me doesn't think i deserve them >_< *is not good* i'm already happy making people happy. and stir some kind of emotions in them or make them think about things and what i wrote. those are what i consider my fulfillment.

i'm picky with smut. (tho i love reading too) for me it has to be relevant (tho there are some pwps that i could enjoy) i dun know if i'm making any sense. xDDD i'll write but i think not in here. O_O i realized i'm almost finished~ but 5 chaps still is a long way...

nyaa~ i'm gonna go hikikomori mode. T^T but i'll be back ^_~

ireallywuvyousomuchnaw~ how do i tell you that besides repeating it over and over??? xDD chuu_ x500 times??? cus you're a fan of chuus~ ^3^

[a_ashi]

awieeeee this was sweeeeeet <3
*glomps backu*

I did and they went well,I'll find out the results this weekend.They do ruin life and I have another one at the end of july for college >.<.haha yupiii it was and and good luck with yours XD

awww *pokes cheeks* you do deserve them *nods nods*
I used to be picky with smut to,but I guess i grew so much as a fan of alice nine and everything that has to do with them.But my favorite fics remain the ones like this one.Cause they're beautiful and they show emotions and feelings without smut XD.Yesssssss and I don't want it to end -shakes head-
promise when this fic will be over you will start another one with a9? *begs on her knees,puppy eyes*

hikikomori means what I found on wikipedia?I quote "individuals who have chosen to withdraw from social life"
nooooo I miss you already x33

I I wuv you to mucho <3. yaaaaay chuuuuuuuuuus *giggles*