I just ate some pizza, I have a big glass of sauv blanc, and the Rangers are losing, so of course it's a good time to try to edit fic. The problem with id-fic is that it resists becoming less id-tastic, despite the fact that it would be a better story with the changes. I'm not sure what it says about my id that what it wants right now is a lot of people yelling at Darth Vader for making terrible choices, but I suppose there are worse things I could want.
Anyway, writing is hard, but I might have figured out how I'm going to fix this story. I guess we'll see. Wish me luck!
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