17.4 choice

[techygoddess]

Was it really a choice that made her stay with Luci, or was it something else, some wild desire to be someone other than who she had been ‘programmed’ to be, with him she was able to live a little more than she ever had with the Valkarie; not as much as she could if she stayed with Gabriel, but she was also safe, something she hadn’t really felt in

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[musemod]

This should be more than one sentence. Please refer to our Mod Note HERE.

[techygoddess]

Actually the punctuation is correct. how it's written it's reasonably one.

[musemod]

Actually, it is a question, and then a second sentence following it.