The Only Colour Better Than Black Is Transparent Chap 1

Feb 23, 2012 21:47


A.N. Please have read the prologue before starting ne? Or this will confuse you (but still make you laugh like an idiot, I promise)

Basically, one very pissed off angel has a hell of a bad day *pun intended*

Angels, be they black or white-winged, are superior entities compared to humans. They can use their entire brain capacity, control the elements ( Read more... )

angel, transparent, kat-tun, fanfiction, university, black, fanfic, white, junda

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pandanyan February 23 2012, 09:40:44 UTC
*TEARS OF JOY* TwT I can't even...I laughed so hard my sides hurt >w<

LOL Junno's reaction to getting hit by a car....really I don't know what to say to that but it really does sound like something Junno would do.....or say ._.

And Ueda's whole reaction to everything xD and Junno and LOL something tells me the white angels planned this =w=...or i guess that was pretty obvious xD

“…Why would you do this to me?!” the man was already a mess of tears, “Please don’t send my body back to my parents… They’ll cry… waaah!!! Get me out of here!!! I start university tomorrow and I don’t want to die yet!!! Can’t you ransom me or something- WOOAAAHH

^ I am amused by the fact that Junno had nothing to say about the whole raping thing ._.

(Ueda did nothing but dry his hair and fall on top of him the night before)

^...This...lol I'm just amused xD

GAH YOU!!! I'M ALREADY HOOKED ON THIS AND I CAN'T HELP BUT WANT MOAR *is greedy* >w< LOVE YOU TO BITS!!!! <3 <3 <3 *glomps*

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mrstaguchi100 February 23 2012, 09:54:27 UTC
I'm glad you liked it..... Oh the crack!!

This is so slapstick i wonder how I can add romance! Lol I put myself in Junno's shoes and asked myself what I would do if I were a completely innocent optimist, how would I react to being hit by a car? I'm happy you found him funny and not annoying though.....

And yes, all Ueda did was dry his hair and fall asleep. What did you think he would do to his road kill? I would imagine him to be quite picky with fornication.

XD I love hooking people..... I was going to say that I was a hooker but that sounds wrong .___.

Thanks for reading!!

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familytables February 23 2012, 10:35:46 UTC
The idiot flashed yet another trademark 1000-watt smile. “Thank you for rescuing me!”

“I ran you over to begin with.”

“I know. But you saved me.”

“I threw you in my car boot to suffocate."

“Yet I’m alive.”

“This conversation is getting nowhere.”

“I’m cold. When are you going to get me clothes?”

“AAARRGGHH!!!!” Ueda stormed in the general direction his body led him, possibly up to the bedroom.

I loved this part SO MUCH! I can't wait to see what happens next.

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mrstaguchi100 February 24 2012, 03:08:44 UTC
hehehehe from comment threads, you now read my fics? XD *bows* i am honoured.

i shall not disappoint~

thank you for commenting and i'm glad you love it so much!

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familytables February 24 2012, 07:14:15 UTC
I've read your fics and I hope I remembered to comment. That and RL got in my way of reading The Brilliant Royal Divorce Plan. But I'll get around to it and will make sure to comment.
You wont disappoint I'm sure. You haven't yet.

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mrstaguchi100 February 24 2012, 03:10:17 UTC
i'm so happy most people picked up on what was wrong with junno's reaction to rape XD he's so slow in this fic i don't even know why :)

i'm happy you love it so much!

thanks for the comment!

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krystal_32206 February 23 2012, 10:42:07 UTC
ROFLMAO!!!

I've been laughing like crazy from start to finish that my flatmate thought I've lost my mind.:)

Junno is so...Junno! :)))

And the last line.. "proven fact: Hell on Earth is no urban legend. It is very, terrifyingly real. And if you fail to kill it with an Aston Martin, there was no way out." This bowled me over! LOVE IT!!!! I could quote this forever! :D

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mrstaguchi100 February 24 2012, 03:12:27 UTC
hahahaha thank you for being so kind! my wit finally gains me something ^_____________^

yeah okay... we all know that if uepi actually hit junno with a car, he probably won't get mad. so there you go - only dramatically enhanced.

personally the last line was my favourite. it kind of shows how badly ueda wants out of this situation ROFL

life is unkind, no? XD

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kissmegreen February 23 2012, 16:23:14 UTC
I love the idea of them being college students - my lord, angel ueda will definitely be living his hell on earth but in time I'm sure [or rather, I hope] he'll adjust to more things/persons than one!

I'm looking foward to the story development... I love the narration and the tone and the plot is very thrilling and of course, I love anything JunDa that's this funny and well written ;-)

Hurry with Chappie 2 please ! *ok... pretty pls*

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mrstaguchi100 February 24 2012, 03:14:43 UTC
college students get away with anything ^___^

angel ueda lives a life only himself can understand... putting up with junno may take a few years off his life ROFL this sooo needs to be an anime hahahaha

i try my best. and i don't want you making me hurry because you know all :P (not really ALL but.... )

thanks for coming to comment!!

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