Fic: "Without Knowing How" (MCR/MSI, Frank/Jamia/Gerard/Lindsey, NC-17)

[mrsronweasley]

Title: "Without Knowing How"
Authors: ciel_vert and mrsronweasley
Pairing: Frank/Jamia/Gerard/Lindsey, and all variations therein
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4200
Disclaimer: Lies. All lies.
Warnings: None
Summary: This should feel like something out of a totally cheesy porno; like, in any scenario where he might have dreamed this up, Frank would have thought it

Comments

[modillian]

[ciel_vert]

Thank you! And hopefully the lie down helped. :)

[desfinado]

Oh man, WIVES. <333 I loved how marathon-y this was! I know I am guilty of it but PWPs usually have just one sex scene before they end, but if it really is a first-time and it's really that good, why wouldn't they go again? I like the fucked-out, sore, slick feeling of their second round, how they're more coordinated with each other.

Jamia's gasping and cursing, her hair is a total sweaty mess, and Frank can't see Lindsey's face, but he can see where her fingers are digging into J's hips, blunt nails scraping against her pale skin, leaving marks Frank wants to chase with his tongue. He knows what it's like to have a turned-on and lost in it Jamia on your hands, and he'd be almost jealous of Lindsey.This was so sweet, I will admit I was in a totally Frank/Jamia place through this whole story. The way he thinks about her, how she feels, tastes, smells, her amazing ass, even calling her "J", it just gave me such huge smiles

[ciel_vert]

Thank you so much for the awesome feedback (dude seriously, you always give THE BEST feedback)! I'm glad having them go more than one round worked for you (it did the same for us ngl). And I'm glad the Frank/Jamia vibe held strong throughout, even though Frank isn't physically with her much at all in the story. Seriously, thank you for the kind words and I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

[ciel_vert]

LOL that's awesome. And yes, you do gurgle, it's pretty fantastic! I'm so glad you liked this bb, thank you so much! ♥

[tabula_x_rasa]

Were I capable of actual thought anymore, I'm sure I would say something clever about how awesome it was. As things are, I only have

\o/

and you have no one to blame but yourselves.

[ciel_vert]

Haha thank you bb! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[chuckaloonie]

Okay, obviously this was brain-melting hot, and gave me a lot of delicious mental images, and if life was fair this would be canon because it's too hot not to be happening IRL.

BUT. But. I'm in a sappy mood right now, so what I loved the most about this was how much they all trust each other. How much they trust their spouses, and their friends, and how much they love each other that there was no awkwardness the morning after, how natural it felt for all of them despite being their first time. I'm sure they all felt the same way as Frank, in the sense that it was not only the novelty of another body what turned him on so much, but also watching Jamia, the familiarity of her body, of her noises; to a point where he was fucking Lindsey with the rythm that he knows Jamia likes when he heard that she was so close, as if he was the one who was fucking her, making her feel that way. But at the same time, he was perfectly aware of Lindsey, of how hot she felt, and of Gerard.
But you said it better than me:
Frank feels like he’s being pulled

[ciel_vert]

Thank you so much! This is an amazing comment and I'm so glad to know all of the little things that worked for you. I'm glad it was a slice of heaven for you (and that seriously made me blush, thank you)! :)