Fic: "Without Knowing How" (MCR/MSI, Frank/Jamia/Gerard/Lindsey, NC-17)

[mrsronweasley]

Title: "Without Knowing How"
Authors: ciel_vert and mrsronweasley
Pairing: Frank/Jamia/Gerard/Lindsey, and all variations therein
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4200
Disclaimer: Lies. All lies.
Warnings: None
Summary: This should feel like something out of a totally cheesy porno; like, in any scenario where he might have dreamed this up, Frank would have thought it

Comments

[desfinado]

Oh man, WIVES. <333 I loved how marathon-y this was! I know I am guilty of it but PWPs usually have just one sex scene before they end, but if it really is a first-time and it's really that good, why wouldn't they go again? I like the fucked-out, sore, slick feeling of their second round, how they're more coordinated with each other.

Jamia's gasping and cursing, her hair is a total sweaty mess, and Frank can't see Lindsey's face, but he can see where her fingers are digging into J's hips, blunt nails scraping against her pale skin, leaving marks Frank wants to chase with his tongue. He knows what it's like to have a turned-on and lost in it Jamia on your hands, and he'd be almost jealous of Lindsey.

This was so sweet, I will admit I was in a totally Frank/Jamia place through this whole story. The way he thinks about her, how she feels, tastes, smells, her amazing ass, even calling her "J", it just gave me such huge smiles.

Also, Frank coming at the end was POSSIBLY my favourite part! What I love most about threesomes/moresomes is the feeling of being totally overwhelmed -- so much sensation, bodies, limbs, everything. And he was truly overwhelmed right then, kind of a bit used by everyone, and it was HOT. Mmm.

[ciel_vert]

Thank you so much for the awesome feedback (dude seriously, you always give THE BEST feedback)! I'm glad having them go more than one round worked for you (it did the same for us ngl). And I'm glad the Frank/Jamia vibe held strong throughout, even though Frank isn't physically with her much at all in the story. Seriously, thank you for the kind words and I'm so glad you enjoyed this!