Awww... poor Jared. Jensen is gone so much and he's been left to his recovery and taking care of things on his own. I am glad he had Ellie to worry about him and take care of him (should have been Jensen though :P IMO) when Jared wasn't really taking it as easy as he should have been; and I liked Josh's reassurances at the end about how Jensen does love Jared so much. I like that Jensen's family seem fond of Jared.
Wes is likable but I can totally understand Jared's insecurities. It would be so hard when you look at someone else and feel they are better suited than you are for your loved one :)
I loved the lingering affects of Jared's accident although there really wasn't much reaction from Jensen about it, other than his pulling away. I had expected him to fuss a bit more about Jared taking things easy but seems Jensen has really been too busy to, probably.
And awk - a complication that we didn't get to see??? That is so needing a missing scene!! LOL!!
I understand you wanting Jensen around more instead of Ellie helping, but it was needed for the fic and all lol. Happy you enjoyed it though :).
And I never intended to do a scene with the complications but I might now ;). I just added the line "the bruises had ended up causing bleeding in the surrounding tissues that had to be drained" so that I had a better reason as to why he'd still be hurting weeks after the accident. I hate being freakishly inconsistent and unrealistic in fics lol.
Well a ficlet or missing scene would never go astray...
Hey, not sure if anyone suggested this in the other thread, but I know when I was pregnant, not long before the baby came, I went through a period where I was just really blue. Just sad... maybe something - could be very short - where Jared is just kinda sad, down or something and Jensen notices and tries to cheer him up. By that point, poor kid is probably just feeling like he is nothing but an incubator, lol!! And it has nothing to do with his excitement about the new baby - just he is sad...
Hmm...I just checked it on my laptop and it worked perfectly fine & no one else has mentioned it. So I'm not sweetie :\. Here's the link though. http://moviegeek03.livejournal.com/42350.html
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Glad to see you've posted, off to read the rest now:P
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Wes is likable but I can totally understand Jared's insecurities. It would be so hard when you look at someone else and feel they are better suited than you are for your loved one :)
I loved the lingering affects of Jared's accident although there really wasn't much reaction from Jensen about it, other than his pulling away. I had expected him to fuss a bit more about Jared taking things easy but seems Jensen has really been too busy to, probably.
And awk - a complication that we didn't get to see??? That is so needing a missing scene!! LOL!!
Off to read the second chapter now!
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And I never intended to do a scene with the complications but I might now ;). I just added the line "the bruises had ended up causing bleeding in the surrounding tissues that had to be drained" so that I had a better reason as to why he'd still be hurting weeks after the accident. I hate being freakishly inconsistent and unrealistic in fics lol.
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Hey, not sure if anyone suggested this in the other thread, but I know when I was pregnant, not long before the baby came, I went through a period where I was just really blue. Just sad... maybe something - could be very short - where Jared is just kinda sad, down or something and Jensen notices and tries to cheer him up. By that point, poor kid is probably just feeling like he is nothing but an incubator, lol!! And it has nothing to do with his excitement about the new baby - just he is sad...
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