Broken Angel 4/?

[moviegeek03]

Title: Broken Angel 4/?
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Word Count: ~5600
Rating/Warnings: NC-17 for violence, sexual situations, and references to non-con(but nothing graphic)
A/N: This story is based off a prompt by the amazing imogen_lily . Thank you so much for the gorgeous banner and for letting me play with this idea! I appreciate all the help sweetie

Comments

[imogen_lily]

yay!!! Another chapter! I really enjoyed reading this (again *G*) I'm really mad with Lauren, defending someone she *knows* does terrible things. Poor Jensen, he's so worried about Jared, I wouldn't be able to stand someone I love going under cover like that.

I'm really curious exactly *how* Jared is going to go undercover to draw Lehne out *shudders*

I love Sam in this, she's so cool and that flashback was perfect

can't *wait* for the next chapter!!! *squees*

[moviegeek03]

Yeah, was definitely hating Lauren when I wrote her...but have some ideas for her for later lol.

I'll have chapter 5 hopefully by tomorrow or Saturday at the latest. I'm going to spend my night writing it since I don't have classes tomorrow. I'm going to start to get into the undercover...hopefully lol. I have an idea in my head.

And thank you once again! I'm having fun with the flashbacks lol.

[glimmerella]

I'm love, love, loving the story! Can't wait to see what happens next.

[moviegeek03]

Thanks sweetie!! I'm writing up chapter 5 now :)

[zara_zee]

Great chapter. You sex scene was very tastefully done!

I love the way you fill in the back story with flash backs.

I'm awfully worried that Lehne will recognise Jared. Despite how many young men he's abused over the years, I can't help feeling he's gonna remember the one who got away!

[moviegeek03]

Thank you! I was worried about it being really sudden or not flowing since I've never really written it before. And I love writing flashbacks anyway...but I really liked the idea of using that to show the backstory. So I'm glad you liked that too :)

You get a bit of that I believe in the next chapter...with Jared's undercover and Lehne I mean. I'm writing it now :D

[shenova]

I can understand why Jared wants to go under cover he wants to stop what is happening before anyone else gets hurt and he can get rid of his own demons. Jensen is so sweet with Jared during the flashback shows what a wonderful boyfriend he is. I think the hard times are ahead for both of them. Nice update.

[moviegeek03]

Aww...thank you hun! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[froggyfun365]

I loved the flashback scene too! Although, I am kind of confused about how Jared is going to go undercover without Lehne recognizing him... You would think he would have kept tabs on the one that got away and would be aware of who he is, what he does, and what he looks like, or even if he hasn't that he would recognize him from before... I am really loving this story though and Tessa is adorable!

[moviegeek03]

Thank you!

And hopefully will clear that up some in the next chapter. Lehne will eventually recognize him, that probably isn't a surprise lol. It just won't be immediate. Jared has changed in appearance enough that, combined with the fact the attack was years ago, Lehne doesn't put it together immediately. Jared's family and the cops at the time of the attack did a good job of keeping Jared out of Lehne's sight and knowledge, something that will later be addressed as well. Hopefully that helps to make more sense.

And more Tessa as well :). She was fun to write hehe