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I've been writing more of this story about embalming that I started 6716845 weeks ago. Would anyone mind reading what I have so far? I'm worried that I'm using too much jargon and going into too much detail about stuff people who aren't embalmers either wouldn't get or wouldn't care about, and not talking about the characters enough. I'd really appreciate other opinions about it. (The original entry is friends locked.)