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mouter

fic: Broken memory (2/5 or 2/6)

Nov 05, 2010 22:54

It was lovely sunny day. Kazuya had his day off, so he went for a walk with his pupils. He had a head full of minds, wondered what had he do for lunch, since his best friend didn’t do cooking things property. His friend promised came to him after work, so he had a whole day for himself. Then suddenly he heard someone’s voice, which was calling him ( Read more... )

fic: broken memory

Comments 15

Spot for Kari-chan mouter November 5 2010, 21:55:21 UTC

'Cause you're always there, when I need a good advice, or a simple hug *hug*

Re: Spot for Kari-chan karilly November 6 2010, 04:10:19 UTC

Yay for giving hug...I'm a hug machine nyahaha~ XD I'm glad you think my clumsy advice are good &hearts ( ... )

Re: Spot for Kari-chan mouter November 6 2010, 11:14:50 UTC

Yay! I'm really glad you like it.
Ueda felt really guilty, but yes their decision was bad, but in the same time the best one. And I know what do you mean ^^" So yes, it make sense xD

Love you too. No need to thanks!

Spot for Nori-chan mouter November 5 2010, 21:56:17 UTC

I hope you like it dear.
Thank you for your help :)

Re: Spot for Nori-chan norilys November 6 2010, 01:36:56 UTC

You know, baby boy? You just made me cry for real with your words in the A/N... I'm so happy you feel comfortable enough with us to open up and share your life and thoughts with us. I'm rally happy, 'cause you're a great friend and and awesome boy ^_^

About the chapter, well I had to read first one and this and.... WHY DID YOU KILL JIIIIIIIIIN~? *whimpers and cries* I love Jin with all my heart and I can't believe I'm reading a fic where he dies u___u

Though, putting that aside, I think this is the first time I read a fic where one of them loses the memory after one of them dies... I wonder how poor Kame-chan would react when he finds out about Jin's dead....

but then again.... Why Jin had to die? *cries some more*

*Breaths in and out*

And Koki and the others should know better than to lie. Lies never are good, ne~~ i can't wait for the other chapter, baby boy!! You're getting better and better ^_^&hearts *hugs tight* And I love you so much, and I'm glad I got to meet you &hearts

Re: Spot for Nori-chan mouter November 6 2010, 11:17:40 UTC

*hide behind the desk*
Sorry for that Nori-chan! I'd killed him, 'cause I don't like him... but seriously I killed him 'cause I wanted took old idea of lost memory and do it in the new way. I mean... I wanted give it a little oryginally. But I don't know if it works ^^

Love you too, and I'm glad you like it my Goddes *hugs*

Re: Spot for Nori-chan norilys November 6 2010, 14:12:21 UTC

No need to apologize, my baby boy!!! When it comes to Jin, I'm a bit overdramatic u__U

I like that you are thinking outside the box... It's interesting, especially because Jin's presence is still in the fic even after his death...

And it's working..!! Your originality it's great....

Now, I just wonder how come Kari-chan inspired you to kill my JinJin... *pouts*

Of course I liked it, my baby boy!!! &hearts *hugs*

spot for Gina-chan moon_catcher November 5 2010, 23:23:37 UTC

and spot for me *pouts* because I want to be in such a great company of Kari-chan and Nori-chan but still need to read the first chap (but not now, too tired) before reading this one and telling you what I think about it, ne?
*hugs*
*be back soon*

Re: spot for Gina-chan mouter November 5 2010, 23:29:47 UTC

Spot for Gina-chan will be on the third part. Promises ! *hug* Go to sleep!

Re: spot for Gina-chan moon_catcher November 9 2010, 19:03:20 UTC

Jaaaa~ finally
long day at schoolHonesty? THIS is going to be such a heart-wrecking fic to read, my dear. I soo wanted to hug Kame each time he dreamt about Jin not able to remember the face or anything else... And the fear of how he will react after finding out the truth makes me want to hug him even tighter ( ... )

Re: spot for Gina-chan mouter November 9 2010, 19:12:24 UTC

'Cause he is just like a Teddy Bear, so I'm not surpriced you want to hug him. And hug him if you want xD
No need to be sorry. I'm glad you're doing that.
I'm glad you like it a little.
Honestly, thank you for reading and for your opinion!

wintersdancer November 5 2010, 23:49:13 UTC

They're like fire and water...loved that part *_*
Angry Maru was almost scary. I couldn't imagine him angry 'till now, but I definitely can now! And he was right.
I'll wait for the next chapter ♥

mouter November 6 2010, 11:18:24 UTC

He is scary, isn't he? I like this Maru to be the truth ^^ And I'm glad you like it!

abi_manyu November 6 2010, 01:26:32 UTC

home sweet home for kame??
i'm not that sure..

thanks for updating..
yohoo, lil bro... thank you.. <333

mouter November 6 2010, 11:19:22 UTC

Yeah, I'm not sure too... but who knows?
Maybe there will be better than in hospital?

No need to thanks sis *hug* Thanks for reading!